题目内容
11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处开始)不计分.
There's an old man in our village calling Old Joe,who said to be 110years old.This can't be proved though he doesn't have a birth certificate.All his personal papers destroyed during World WarⅡ.I don't know if he is really so old,and it doesn't matter.He certainly looks very old.Of course,he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life.Old Joe always answered them like this:"If you are offered cigarette,never accept it;if you are annoyed by someone,never lose his temper;and if you are asked foolishly questions,never answer them."
分析 作者在本文中介绍了村里的老人Old Joe的一些情况.
解答 There's an old man in our village calling Old Joe,who∧said to be 110years old.This can't be proved though he doesn't have a birth certificate.All his personal papers∧destroyed during World WarⅡ.I don't know if he is really so old,and it doesn't matter.He certainly looks very old.Of course,he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life.Old Joe always answered them like this:"If you are offered∧cigarette,never accept it;if you are annoyed by someone,never lose his temper;and if you are asked foolishly questions,never answer them."
详解:
1.calling改为called;考查过去分词作定语.man和call之间是动宾关系,即一个被叫做…的人,应该用过去分词作定语,故把calling改为called.
2.who后加is;考查定语从句.who引导一个定语从句,从句中缺少谓语动词,根据"There's an old man"可知短文用的是一般现在时,故在who和said之间加is.
3.though改为because;考查状语从句.分析句意为:这得不到证明,因为他没有出生证明.前后是因果关系,故用because引导一个原因状语从句.
4.papers后加were;考查被动语态.papers和destroy是动宾关系,即文件被毁坏,故加were与destroyed构成被动语态.
5.and改为but;考查并列连词.句意:我不知道他是不是真的有那么大年纪了,但这无关紧要.前后是转折关系,故把and改为but.
6.question改为questions;考查名词.经常有人问他问题,question问题,是可数名词,被问过的问题不止一个,应该用复数形式,故把question改为questions.
7.answered改为answers;考查时态.always与一般现在时连用,且根据"There's an old man…I don't know…he is often…who want to…"可知,短文使用的是一般现在时,故把answered改为answers.
8.offered后加a;考查冠词,cigarette 是可数名词的单数形式,前面加a表示泛指.
9.his改为your;考查物主代词.根据"if you are annoyed…"可知,这里说的是"你"you,故用形容词性物主代词your,故把his改为your.
10.foolishly改为foolish;考查形容词.形容词作定语修饰名词,这里修饰名词questions,应该用形容词,故把foolishly改为foolish.
点评 文改错首先要通读全文,整体理解短文的中心思想,然后根据短文讲述的事情确定文章的基本时态,再运用基础语言知识从时态,语态,句式结构,固定短语等方面彻底进行分析,以便尽快找出短文的错误加以修改.
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