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【题目】自微信开发了红包电子支付以来,电子红包开始在中国手机用户中流行开来。借助网络时代的新方法,电子红包给中国传统红包赋予了新的意义。请针对这一现象,写120词左右的的作文

内容应包括:

1.简要描述这一社会现象

2.分析微信红包的优缺点(方便,增添欢乐…过度沉迷,浪费时间…)

3.阐述你的看法

参考词汇:压岁钱:gifting money 微信:We Chat 电子红包: Red envelopes

电子支付:electronic payments

"Red envelope" fever has swept the country since We Chat came up with a program allowing users to send cash through electronic payments.________________________

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【答案】

"Red envelope" fever has swept the country since We Chat came up with a program allowing users to send cash through electronic payments. This gives the traditions typical of this festive period a facelift as well as some problems.

On the one hand, the brilliant idea takes the Chinese New Year tradition of gifting money into the digital era, which makes gifting money convenient and more accessible to people. What’s more, it can bring people more fun and they can make their friendship with others closer. With electronic red envelopes, you're not limited by your identity or the time of year. On the other hand, electronic red envelopes also attract more teenagers and adults to become hooked on their phones, affecting their social or school life. They spend all their free time surfing and don’t concentrate on work.

In my opinion, "Red envelope" provides a brand new way of communication for people and obviously adds to more fun if used properly.

【解析】

试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出,根据所给要点文章可分三段来写:第一段简要描述这一社会现象;第二段分析微信红包的优缺点,学生可结合自身实际写;第三段阐述自己的看法写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇描述社会现象的短文,采用三段式,条理清晰,观点阐述明确,布局合理,文中使用高级句子。On the one hand, the brilliant idea takes the Chinese New Year tradition of gifting money into the digital era, which makes gifting money convenient and more accessible to people.运用非限制性定语从句;On the other hand, electronic red envelopes also attract more teenagers and adults to become hooked on their phones, affecting their social or school life.现在分词结果状语;obviously adds to more fun if used properly.连词加过去分词作状语使用巧妙;另外,On the one hand, On the other hand, What’s more, In my opinion,的运用为文章增色添彩。

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【题目】Mr. Selfridge, the Wisconsin-born retailer (零售商) who left school at 14, rose to become a partner in Marshall Field's, Chicago. Founded in 1852, it was one of the first and most ambitious US department stores. Mr. Selfridge had done well with Marshall Field's. He liked to say, “The customer is always right,” which made the Chicago store popular. And he is believed to have invented the phrase “Only so many Shopping Days until Christmas”.

When he visited London on holiday in 1906 he was surprised to find most of the city's department stores were no match for their American and Parisian competitors. This led Selfridge to leave the US and establish Selfridges. a department store named after him at the west end of London's Oxford Street. In Oxford Street, Selfridge's design team shaped an ambitious classical place building with a wall of plate glass windows.

Opened in 1909, Selfridges offered customers a hundred departments along with restaurants, a roof garden, reading and writing rooms, reception areas for foreign visitors, a first-aid room and most importantly, a small army of knowledgeable floor-walking assistants who served as guides as well as being thoroughly instructed in the art of making a sale.

Mr. Selfridge did much to make the department store a destination rather than just a big and comprehensively stocked city shop. It became a place to meet and for ladies to lunch. Mr. Selfridge later introduced the department store as a key element of the 20th Century culture, and Chaplin acknowledged the growing trend for shopping in the department store in his film The Floorwalker.

【1】What can be learned about Mr. Selfridge from Paragraph 1?

A. He was well-educated.

B. He was a gifted businessman.

C. He was a modest man.

D. He was dishonest.

【2】What made Selfridge build a department store in London?

A. The industrial atmosphere in London.

B. His desire to own a department store.

C. His confidence in business success.

D. Affection for London architecture.

【3】What was Selfridges' most impressive characteristic?

A. The number of departments.

B. The broad choice of goods.

C. The small group of guards.

D. The well-trained sales guides.

【4】What is the main purpose of the article?

A. To introduce the retailer, Selfridge.

B. To compare different department stores.

C. To encourage readers to spend more.

D. To explain how to start a department store.

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