Question

【题目】假定你是李华，暑假期间去某个岛上游玩，看见有很多可爱的动物。听岛上的一位老人说，现在动物的数量日渐减少，如果不采取措施，有些动物会有绝迹的危险。回来后你给野生动物保护协会写信，就保护动物提出以下建议：

1. 制定保护动物的法律

2. 建立动物保护区

3. 提高公众保护动物的意识

提示：提高---意识：raise one’s awareness 保护区：reserve

注意：1. 词数：100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，该部分不计入总词数。

2. 涵盖所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当增加细节。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my opinion on how to protect animals on the island I visited last weekend.

Please help the poor animals. I am sure that they will survive with your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to express my opinion on how to protect the monkeys on the island I visited last weekend. The animals there are lovely, but it’s said that the number of them is decreasing year by year. If measures aren’t taken, they will be in danger of extinction.

As far as I’m concerned, laws concerning animal protection should be made to punish those illegal hunters. Besides, it is advisable to set up natural reserves or refuges. There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments are more likely to survive and reproduce. What’s more, something should be done to raise people’s awareness of protecting animals.

To sum up, protecting animals is of great urgency and it is vital for us to take steps to protect them.

Please help the poor animals. I am sure that they will survive with your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇书信类作文，需要写出1.制定保护动物的法律2.建立动物保护区3.提高公众保护动物的意识 。写作时还需要注意：以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式，英文书信格式与中文有所不同，(1)、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期，地址应按从小到大的顺序排列；(2)、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名；(3)、正文部分；(4)、祝愿的话；(5)、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写，不要漏写。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，用固定搭配As far as I’m concerned引出了自己的观点。用 of great urgency代替形容词的使用， If measures aren’t taken, they will be in danger of extinction. 是一个条件状语从句，用了To sum up结尾做了一个总结，用了较多复合句让文章更加出彩。