Question

8．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语，希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站．请你根据以下内容，给他回复邮件．
推荐网站：www．edchinese．com
网站内容：
1．网络课程：中文情景对话、中国风俗、成语；
2．其它：中文电影、中文歌曲、唐诗等；
3．有在线教师答疑解惑．
费用：全部免费
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Edward，
I am so pleased to learn that you are learning Chinese．I'd like to recommend www．estudychinese．com to you．It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese，especially for beginners．（高分句型）
Firstly，it provides you with a variety of online courses，such as Chinese idioms，dialogues and customs．Besides，the website will help you learn Chinese in most interesting and effective ways．Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs，enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies．Most important of all，if you meet with some difficulties in learning Chinese，there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help．（高分句型）And at last，the website is free of charge．
I hope you will find this website interesting and helpful．（高分句型）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇以邮件形式的作文，注意邮件的格式，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．
   亮点说明：本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构．比如It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese是定语从句，以及运用了It is…for sb．（to do） sth．．此外，文章还使用了大量短语provide sb．with sth．，I'd like to，meet with，turn to sb．for help，free of charge，look forward to，等．插入语most important of all，And at last的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯．

解答 Dear Edward，
     I am so pleased to learn that you are learning Chinese．I'd like to recommend www．estudychinese．com to you．It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese，especially for beginners．（高分句型）
     Firstly，it provides you with a variety of online courses，such as Chinese idioms，dialogues and customs．Besides，the website will help you learn Chinese in most interesting and effective ways．Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs，enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies．Most important of all，if you meet with some difficulties in learning Chinese，there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help．（高分句型）And at last，the website is free of charge．
     I hope you will find this website interesting and helpful．（高分句型）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．