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3．假设你是王林，得知你校拟聘用一名英语口语老师，你的美国朋友Peter已经教书十年，而且对中国文化很感兴趣．请你用英语给他发一封100词左右的电子邮件，希望他能来应聘．口语老师要求如下：
1．精通英语，大学毕业；2．教学经验丰富，性格开朗；3．喜欢学生，工作负责．
注意：1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称．
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？
I'm writing to tell you that there is an English oral teacher wanted in my school．It's required that the teacher should have a good command of English and graduate from a college．（高分句型一）In addition，he must have rich teaching experience for 5 years，and he is an open-minded person．And most importantly，the oral teacher should be responsible for his teaching，who feels happy staying with his students．（高分句型二）Since you are the native teacher of English，I think you are suitable for the job．（高分句型三）So I hope you may come to apply so that you can learn more about Chinese culture．
Yours，
Wang Lin．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息用英语给美国朋友Peter发一封100词左右的电子邮件，希望他能来应聘，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：精通英语，大学毕业；教学经验丰富，性格开朗；喜欢学生，工作负责．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：It's required that the teacher should have a good command of English and graduate from a college．（高分句型一）句中It's required that…是固定句式，其中it是形式主语，that为主语从句
And most importantly，the oral teacher should be responsible for his teaching，who feels happy staying with his students．（高分句型二）句中who引导的是非限制性定语从句
Since you are the native teacher of English，I think you are suitable for the job．（高分句型三）句中since引导的是原因状语从句

解答 Dear Peter，
      How is everything going？
      I'm writing to tell you that there is an English oral teacher wanted in my school．It's required that the teacher should have a good command of English and graduate from a college．（高分句型一）In addition，he must have rich teaching experience for 5 years，and he is an open-minded person．And most importantly，the oral teacher should be responsible for his teaching，who feels happy staying with his students．（高分句型二）Since you are the native teacher of English，I think you are suitable for the job．（高分句型三）So I hope you may come to apply so that you can learn more about Chinese culture．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Wang Lin

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．