题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,长沙大剧院(Changsha Grand Theatre)将上演经典越剧(Shaoxing opera)《梁山伯与祝英台》(Butterfly Lovers)。请写封邮件邀请你校来自英国的交换生 Chris一起观看,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 演出信息;
3. 观看理由(至少两条)。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Chris,
I am LiHua. How is everything going with you? Knowing that you are enthusiastic about Chinese operas, I am writing to invite you to watch with me a classical Shaoxing opera, Butterfly Lovers to be staged at Changsha Grand Theatre at 7:00 p. m. on 21st, September.
Butterfly Lovers, one of the most renowned operas in China, tells a touching love story between a young man, Liang Shanbo, and a young girl, Zhu Yingtai. Though in deep love, they are unable to marry. Dying of a broken heart and despair, they transform into two butterflies, never to be parted again. I am convinced that it will be a good opportunity for you to learn Chinese culture. Besides, it will be a feast for opera lovers, for some of the greatest Chinese opera singers are cast in this production. You will be impressed with their wonderful voices, the music and the setting!
If you have any questions about it, don’t hesitate to ask me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,写一封邮件,邀请Chris观看越剧。
第一步:
审题:邮件——邀请信
人称:第二、三人称
时态:一般现在时
结构:总分法,分三部分:第一部分写信目的,第二部分说明演出信息和邀请Chris观看的理由,第三部分期望早日答复。
要点:
1. 写信目的:邀请Chris一起观看经典越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》
2.演出信息
①时间、地点:9月21 日晚上7点在长沙大剧院;
②剧情介绍:《梁山伯与祝英台》是一部感人的爱情故事,剧中主人公虽然相爱,但是不能在一起。绝望至极,就双双化蝶,永不分离。
③邀请Chris 观看理由:了解中国文化,欣赏独特的音乐、舞台布景
3.期待早日答复
第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)
be enthusiastic about;Chinese operas;a classical Shaoxing opera;renowned;in deep love;despair;transform into;be convinced;a good opportunity;a feast for …;be impressed with;hesitate
第三步:连词成句
(1)You are enthusiastic about Chinese operas.
(2)It will be staged at Changsha Grand Theatre at 7:00 p. m. on 21st, September.
(3)Butterfly Lovers tells a touching love story between a young man, Liang Shanbo, and a young girl, Zhu Yingtai.
(4)Though they are in deep love, they are unable to marry.
(5)As they are dying of despair, they transform into two butterflies.
(6)It will be a good opportunity for you to learn Chinese culture.
(7)t will be a feast for opera lovers.
(8)You will be impressed with their wonderful voices, the music and the setting!
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用分词作状语连接下面两个句子
(1)I have known that you are enthusiastic about Chinese operas.
(2)I am writing to invite you to watch with me a classical Shaoxing opera.
→Knowing that you are enthusiastic about Chinese operas, I am writing to invite you to watch with me a classical Shaoxing opera.
用状语从句的省略形式表达下面的句子
Though they are in deep love, they are unable to marry.
→Though in deep love, they are unable to marry.
用表达递进关系的衔接词连接下面两个句子
(1) It will be a good opportunity for you to learn Chinese culture.
(2)t will be a feast for opera lovers.
→It will be a good opportunity for you to learn Chinese culture. Besides, it will be a feast for opera lovers.
→It will be a good opportunity for you to learn Chinese culture. In addition, it will be a feast for opera lovers.
→It will be a good opportunity for you to learn Chinese culture. Additionally, it will be a feast for opera lovers.
→It will be a good opportunity for you to learn Chinese culture. What’s more, it will be a feast for opera lovers.
适当地运用 复杂句式、衔接词等提升文章的档次,增加文章的可读性。