题目内容
【题目】现在你已经进入高中一个月了,请写一篇英语短文来介绍你的英语老师。要点如下表所示:
内容 | 要点提示 |
1老师特点 | 长发大眼,非常漂亮 |
2教学特点 | 课堂生动有趣,和同学相处融洽 |
3多才多艺 | 折纸,唱歌,弹钢琴 |
参考词汇:折纸fold paper 注意:词数100左右。
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【答案】Teachers are often compared to gardeners,because their teaching students is similar to gardeners’ taking care of plants. Now in the Senior High school I have the same opinion.
And after one month’s learning, I can say I meet a really good English teacher—Ms. Liu. She has long hair and big eyes, which makes her look very beautiful. When she smiles, it looks as if the sun were shining. And she has so special teaching methods that she always makes her classes lively and interesting. She also teaches us to fold papers by hand after class, such as dogs, birds. She can play the piano and has a sweet voice especially while singing. We get on well with each other and all of us really love her from the bottom of our hearts.
Meeting such a good teacher is really a precious fortune in my life.
【解析】试题分析:
本文要求根据题干的信息,介绍自己的英语老师。成文时应注意以下几点:(1) 内容完整。(2)人称使用要恰当。以第三人称为主。(3)时态:一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点,列出提纲:第一部分:引出话题;第二部分:介绍英语老师(介绍老师特点,教学方法和老师的才艺);第三部分:表达情感(遇到这样的老师很幸运)。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:非限制性定语从句She has long hair and big eyes, which makes her look very beautiful.;虚拟语气When she smiles, it looks as if the sun were shining.;so…that结构And she has so special teaching methods that she always makes her classes lively and interesting.;动名词作主语Meeting such a good teacher is really a precious fortune in my life。2.使用了重要短语:take care of照顾;is similar to与…相似;get on well with相处。