题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,上周日是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你本来答应参加她的生日聚会,但是你当时正忙于准备月考,不小心忘了赴约。请写信向Anne表达你的歉意,说明原因,并提出补救办法。
注意:1. 字数100左右;
2. 文章中不得出现真实学校与班级;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 开头与结尾已为你写好。
Dear Anne,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Anne,
I am very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party last Sunday. I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you.
It was nice of you to invite me to your party. I should have come and celebrated the precious moment with you, but the monthly test is around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the test that I forgot the appointment. I hope you understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the test? I do long for a pleasant chat with you.
It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of a happy get-together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是应用文写作,写一封道歉信。可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】
I am very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party last Sunday.句中使用宾语从句;It was nice of you to invite me to your party. It作形式主语,真正的主语是后面的动词不定式;I should have come and celebrated the precious moment with you, but the monthly test is around the corner,情态动词加动词不定式的完成式在句中运用,并巧妙使用表示转折的并列句;I was so busy preparing for the test that I forgot the appointment.结果状语从句在句中出现;I hope you understand my situation and forgive me.宾语从句再现;I do long for a pleasant chat with you.强调谓语的使用堪称经典;It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of a happy get-together.强调句的运用把文章推向了高潮。