Question

假定你是李华，你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：
1. 时间：周五晚8点至9点
2. 地点：学生俱乐部
3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等
4. 要求：备小礼物
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置
Hi Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.                         
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

不唯一
Hi Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. We’d like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We’ll gather at the Student’s Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it’s going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we will light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games. It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be. I’m sure you will have a good time at the party, too.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等。测试的题型主要有应用文，看图作文和提示作文。测试内容常常与学生的生活密切相关，也可能是环保或社会焦点。
考点：这是一封信。
点评：提醒考生应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。