Question

【题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。 1家庭；
2工作；
3业余生活。
注意：1词数100左右；
2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

Answer 1

【答案】My parents and I took a seven-day to Paris from Octobe 1 to October 7,2014.It’s our first visit to the city, so we felt very excited. During the trip, we visited many famous scenic spots in Paris such as the Eiffel Tower. We also ate many different kinds of French food. French food is deliciouss and beautiful , and eating them brings the most pleasure.At the end of the trip, we bought many special products from local shops.
The trip to Paris issreally an unforgetable experience. It will always be a special place in my heart.

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，主题是“十年后的我”。在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手，因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身，度假，聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词，插入语以使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，因为是畅想未来，所以要用一般将来时。