题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。你的美国外教David回国时,请你帮他找人制作一枚中文名章(name stamp)以作纪念。你已找好制作人。给他写封邮件,告知此事,并请他从所附图片中挑选字体、图案及材料。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear David,
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
【答案】Dear David,
How is everything going? I can still remember the days we spent together when you taught in China. When you went back to America last month, you mentioned to get a Chinese name stamp made for you, as it is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. Now I'm so glad to tell you that I've already found a stamp craftsman who's experienced and skilled at making Chinese traditional name stamps.
To make a stamp that suits you best, I attach some pictures of various types of characters, designs and materials in the email. You can choose whichever of them you prefer.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:
题干要求给美国外教David写封信,告诉他已找好制作中文名章(name stamp)的制作人,请他在所附图片中挑选字体、图案及材料。成文时应注意以下几点:(1)内容要点齐全,完整叙述题干内容。(2)人称:以第一人称和第二人称为主。(3)时态:一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点,列出提纲:第一段:问候+写信背景(帮David找人制作一枚中文名章,告知David制作人已找好);第二段:写作目的(请他从所附图片中挑选字体、图案及材料);第三段:请回信!祝愿。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:定语从句I can still remember the days we spent together when you taught in China.;含有宾语从句和定语从句的复合句Now I'm so glad to tell you that I've already found a stamp craftsman who's experienced and skilled at making Chinese traditional name stamps.;定语从句To make a stamp that suits you best, ….。2.使用了重要短语:be experienced and skilled at擅长; look forward to期待。