题目内容
6.假设你是李津,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加.请写一封电子邮件申请参加.内容主要包括:
1.自我介绍(包括性格、特长、英语能力,沟通能力等);
2.参加意图(介绍中国的历史与文化并了解其他国家);
3.希望获准.
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Jin,a middle school student from China.(高分句型一)I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years,and I speak fluent English.(高分句型二)What is more,I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Jin
分析 1.这是封信.主要人称为第一人称,基本时态以一般现在时和将来时为主.2.正文的内容主要包括:自我介绍,参加意图,以及希望获准的意愿.3.根据材料中提供的要点信息,正文写成一段即可.学生可联系生活,做出自己理解.
【相关语法点提示】
1.语言要语言简洁,巧妙运用些句型:复合句,以及长短句结合等,如:I read the announcement of the summer camp which you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it等,使文章衔接连贯,流畅.
2.参考词汇和短语:the announcement of,post,I'd like to,be interested in,take part in,be able to等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅.and,what is more等连词使句式多样、文章更加连贯,语气较为婉转.
高分句型一)I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
该句型that you have posted…引导一个定语从句,修饰先行词the summer camp,that在句子里做post宾语.
(高分句型二)What is more,I'lI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.
该句首先使用What is more来起到承上启下的作用,在句子里tell sb sth和learn about为两个并列句.
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Jin,a middle school student from China.(高分句型一)I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years,and I speak fluent English.(高分句型二)What is more,I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | As | B. | Since | C. | Provided | D. | While |
-The trees_____well,but I didn't water them.( )
A. | might grow | B. | would have grown | ||
C. | needn't have grown | D. | would grow |
To be pretty on the inside,at the same time,don't forget to be attractive by being kind and respectful.So listen to people when they talk,and they'll notice you've taken an interest in their words.Help others out when they are in need,and also don't judge other people.
On the other hand,you also should be pretty on the outside.For this,you can do something to change your appearance.For example,change your hairstyle.Wear clothes in which you feel comfortable.Also you can give your skin some extra special care to make it look better.
In fact,the key to being pretty on the outside is working to be healthy.If you're in poor health,you can't look pretty on the outside.So,to keep healthy,have enough sleep every day and work out in a regular way.
Title Be pretty | |||
Tips for being pretty(66)on the inside | Realizing your beauty comes from yourself | ●Listing what you feel good about yourself ●Listing what are (67)beautiful about yourself ●(68)Smiling and saying aloud"I am happy"every morning | |
Treating others (69)kindly and respectfully | •Being a good (70)listener •Helping those in need ●Not (71)judging others/judging other people | ||
Ways of being pretty on the outside | (72)Changing your appearance | •Changing your hairstyle •Wearing (73)comfortable clothes •Taking good care of your (74)skin | |
Keeping healthy | •Having enough sleep every day •(75)Exercising/Working out regularly |