题目内容
4.假如你是李华,为了进一步提高英语水平并了解西方的文化,你打算利用今年暑假的时间去美国Edward语言学习中心学习英语.请根据下面的提示内容给该中心的负责人Bruce写一封信,把自己的要求告诉对方,希望尽快得到答复.①学习内容:英语口语;
②学习方式:最好是讨论或社会调查;
③食宿和交通:住在美国家庭,步行去学校,以便熟悉周围环境;
④学费或其他.
注意:1.词数不少于100;2.必须包含提示内容;3.请勿提及真实学校名称;4.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯.
Dear Bruce,
I'd like to study English in your language center this summer vacation.I think it will greatly improve my spoken English and also I'll learn about American culture.Studying in a traditional class in our country,I'd like a change.I think it's better to discuss in class and it'll be interesting to make a survey of society.If I have a chance to stay in an American family,which will be better.(高分句型一)Living there,I can enjoy their culture and foods.I am wondering if I have a chance to live near the language center.If so,I can go to school on foot,which I think it is easy for me to get to know the place quickly.(高分句型二)
Besides,I'd like some information about your fees.I'd be grateful if you give me a hand.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 高分句型一:
If I have a chance to stay in an American family,which will be better.
如果我有机会住在一个美国家庭的话,那样对我而言会更好的.
高分句型二:
If so,I can go to school on foot,which I think it is easy for me to get to know the place quickly.
如果是那样的话,我可以走路去上学,那样还能帮我更快的熟悉这个地方.
句型一 ①If I have a chance to stay in an American family 该句是一个if引导的条件状语从句
②which will be better.此为which引导的非限制性定语从句,which在句中充当主语,且替代前面整个主句的内容.
句型二 ①If so=If it is so,该句是一个省略句
②which I think it is easy for me to get to know the place quickly此为which引导的非限制性定语从句,which在句中充当主语,且替代前面整个主句的内容.
各种从句在句中的正确使用,使得该篇作文表述具有层次,表达更为准确.
解答 Dear Bruce,
I'd like to study English in your language center this summer vacation.I think it will greatly improve my spoken English and also I'll learn about American culture.Studying in a traditional class in our country,I'd like a change.I think it's better to discuss in class and it'll be interesting to make a survey of society.If I have a chance to stay in an American family,which will be better.(高分句型一)Living there,I can enjoy their culture and foods.I am wondering if I have a chance to live near the language center.If so,I can go to school on foot,which I think it is easy for me to get to know the place quickly.(高分句型二)
Besides,I'd like some information about your fees.I'd be grateful if you give me a hand.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 该书面表达为提纲类作文,它有一定的文字提示或者说明,要求表达的内容要切合所列举的条目,写作时要做到要点表达明确,语言使用准确,简洁合理,让人一目了然.
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