Question

【题目】健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面信息提示，写一篇100词左右的短文。

1）健康饮食 2）早睡早起，不熬夜 3）参加运动，强身健体

Healthy Habit

I think healthy habits are very important for us. As we know,

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Answer 1

【答案】Healthy Habit

I think healthy habits are very important for us. As we know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habits? First, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illnesses. Second, we should take exercise everyday. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Finally, we had better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.

As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.

【解析】试题分析：考察半开放性的议论文。本文讨论的话题是健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的。主要要点包括：1）健康饮食 2）早睡早起，不熬夜 3）参加运动，强身健体描写。所给要点比较简单，考生需要适当添加细节使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。同时也要使用一些高级的词汇和句式提升文章的档次分。在文章中可以适当使用一至两句谚语可以大大提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】：本文脉络清楚合理，文章连贯。文章使用了一些高级句式，如Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illnesses.使用了动名词作主语；As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.使用了状语从句和it作形式主语，代替不定式短语。另外还使用一些过渡词如First…, Second…；Finally。