Question

【题目】短文改错

Dear Sir,

I’m glad to learn that part-time assistants were wanted in your studio and I’d like to have a try. I’m a student who is graduated from high school soon. Before attending the college, I’ll have a long holiday and I’m determined to make the best of them. Since childhood, I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films. My teacher thinks high of my performance in the language class, when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry. Except that, I am monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management.

I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work. I am fully convinced that through communication with the staffs, I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills.

I’m looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Thank you for your consider.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】were—are;

【2】graduated—graduating;

【3】去掉 “attend” 后 “the”;

【4】them—it;

【5】high—highly;

【6】when—where;

【7】Except—Besides;

【8】many—much;

【9】staffs—staff;

【10】consider—consideration

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于应用文，李华写信给对方希望得到一份兼职工作，在信中他介绍了自己的个人信息。

【1】were—are;考查时态。叙述当前应用一般现在时，根据主语part-time assistants谓语动词应用复数形式。

【2】graduated—graduating;考查时态。本处进行时表将来，主动语态。

【3】去掉 “attend” 后 “the”;考查固定搭配及该词用法。动词短语attend college上大学。

【4】them—it;考查代词。本处代指holiday，应用it指代上文出现的同一事物。

【5】high—highly; 考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词做状语修饰形容词、副词、动词或整个句子。本题中使用副词highly修饰动词think。

【6】 when—where;考查定语从句先行词the language class，代入定语从句中做地点状语，应用where。

【7】Except—Besides; 考查副词。besides“除了……之外（还有）”还可以作为副词表示递进关系，意为“而且”；except“除了”。由语境可知，此处应用Besides。

【8】many—much;考查形容词。形容词many通常修饰可数名词复数形式，而much通常修饰不可数名词，本句中是不可数名词experience(经验)，应用much。

【9】staffs—staff;考查名词。 staff(员工)本身即为集合名词，不能加-s。

【10】consider—consideration。 考查名词。介词for的后面通常要接名词做宾语，而consider是动词，不能作为介词的宾语。