题目内容
假设你是李越,发现学生中存在不愿意参加体育活动(physical exercise)的现象。他们认为进行体育活动会浪费时间,影响学习。但你有不同想法。请就此话题给校报老师写一封信,向大家宣传体育锻炼的好处。字数:120词
短文中应包括以下内容:1. 指出他们观点的不对之处;2. 告知体育锻炼的好处;3.提出建议
Dear Editor Teacher,
Dear Editor Teacher,
I’m writing to reflect a problem. Some students do not like to join in physical exercise. They think it is a waste of time and influences their study. However, physical exercise is a necessary part of school life. It is very unwise for students to do so.
We can benefit a lot from physical exercise. Doing sports can help us build up a strong body. It is also a good way for us to reduce pressure and keep a pleasant mood. Besides, when taking exercise, we can communicate with others and improve our social skills.
All kinds of ball games are good choices for us. We can manage our time properly and balance work and play. Weekend is also a good time for sports. Do not hesitate to take exercise.
【解析】
试题分析:主要要围绕体育活动有什么好处,为什么要进行体育活动来展开文章。对于谈看法的文章,注意条理要清晰,注意使用题目提供的相关信息。注意行文的连贯性。时态:用一般现在时。结构上:可采取总分模式。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。【亮点说明】首先,文章采用了it is unwise for sb to do sth 的句式,使文章结构丰满。Doing sports can help us build up a strong body.采用动名词词组做主语,既新颖独特又表明观点,使文章更有水平。When taking exercise ,从句的使用使得条理更加分明。其次,however ,reflect ,unwise 等词语的运用使文章更加生动。词组benefit ….from通过…受益,be good choice for sb 对…是好选择,hesitate to do sth 犹豫,不情愿做某事等的运用,使文章亮点多,水平提升。文章结构上,首先开题提出观点,个性鲜明。其次分点叙述,条理分明;其后总结,行文流畅,有条不紊。
考点:考查材料性文体的写作

下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改10 处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Several days ago, our school decided to prevent students bringing their cell phones to school if they don’t pass all exams from the previously semester. Students don’t welcome this decision.They believe the cell phone is one of the greatest invention in the 20th century, that have become an important part of modern life. Therefore it is also headache for school leaders. Because many students ignore our studies and spend too much time play games, texting and using social network apps such as Wenxin or Wechat. So the leaders have to deal with the serious problem by this way.They don’t expect that something even worse.