题目内容
请根据下面的英语提示写一篇60字左右的短文。
A man’s daughter is seriously ill and he has to rush her to the hospital. But on the way he injures an old lady seriously because of over speeding.
要求：1、请就该材料发表你的感想；
2、应结合材料，有明确的观点；
3、请在答题卡上作答。
I must at first say this father is a responsible father but as a citizen of a society he is not a responsible driver: he only focuses on his own emergency based on the sacrifice of the others’ rights and benefits.
As a member of a society, one has many parts to play. But in my opinion, one should at first be the part that will not harm others on any condition or circumstance. So I think this man should be punished.
【解析】
试题解析：对于谈看法的文章，注意观点明确，条理要清晰，可以用表顺序的关联词，如at first；发表个人意见，可以用in one’s opinion，I think。注意根据材料给予的事实，发表正确和得当的感想和观点。同时注意多进行一些补充，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般现在时。结构上：可采取总分模式。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。
【亮点说明】focus on，be based on，As a member of a society，in my opinion，on any condition or circumstance等词组和短语的运用，使得文章更加生动；at first是文章调理清晰，in my opinion，清楚表示自己的观点。he only focuses on his own emergency based on the sacrifice of the others’ rights and benefits中based on the sacrifice of the others’ rights and benefits是用过去分词短语作定语。
考点：考查对材料性作文的写作
