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17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I have learned English for many years，but I don't have a real chance speak before foreigners．Last week，I happened to meet the foreigner．He badly needed my help and I felt so exciting．On Monday，I went to the flowers shop to buy a flower for my friend Mary，because she was ill．I was going to the hospital to see him．In the shop a foreigner and the boss was having a conversation，so the boss didn't know what the foreigner said．I hesitate for a while，then I came to help the boss．The boss and the foreigner thanked for me so much．I felt so happy though the language I learn is useful．Since then，I have been determined to learn English well．

分析 本文主要讲述作者学习英语多年，上周在花店买花时，碰到一个外国人与老板交谈，但老板不知道外国人说什么，作者便过去给老板帮忙．对此，外国人很感谢作者，作者也感到很高兴因为所学的语言是有用的．

解答 I have learned English for many years，but I don't have a real chance∧speak before foreigners．Last week，I happened to meet the foreigner．He badly needed my help and I felt so exciting．On Monday，I went to the flowers shop to buy a flower for my friend Mary，because she was ill．I was going to the hospital to see him．In the shop a foreigner and the boss was having a conversation，so the boss didn't know what the foreigner said．I hesitate for a while，then I came to help the boss．The boss and the foreigner thanked for me so much．I felt so happy though the language I learn is useful．Since then，I have been determined to learn English well．
详解：
1．加to 考查动词不定式．此处动词 不定式短语to speak before foreigners作后置定语．
2．the改为a 考查冠词．foreigner是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
3．exciting改为excited 考查过去分词．过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．
4．flowers改为flower 考查名词．名词作定语时常用单数形式．
5．him改为her 考查代词．her指代前文提到的Mary，根据上下文可知是女性．
6．was改为were 考查主谓一致．主语a foreigner and the boss是两个人，谓语动词要用复数形式were．
7．so改为but 考查连词．前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非因果关系，用连词but．
8．hesitate改为hesitated 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
9．去掉for 考查词语用法．thank是及物动词，后接宾语时不需要介词．
10．though改为because 考查连词．我感到很高兴因为我学的语言是有用的．用连词because．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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6．假设你是某国际学校的高中毕业生，将参加学校举办的毕业典礼．请根据以下提纲准备一篇英语发言稿．
1．回顾过去；
2．展望未来；
3．临别祝语．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．发言稿的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数．
Good morning，everyone!It's my honor to be here to talk to all of you．
Well，congratulations!We all accomplished one of the major milestones of our lives：high school graduation．
It has been a long three years and a short three years．Long because of all the hard studying and some little failures that hit us in high school．Short because of the lifelong friendships and the truly interesting and amazing things we learned here．
In the near future，some of us will go to college．Some will join the army to help keep our country safe．Others may get right to work．The road that lies ahead won't be easy．
But nothing worthwhile is easy．I believe everyone will keep working hard．I believe we will make the most of our futures and achieve our dreams．
Thank you!
8．We've reached a strange-some would say unusual-point．While fighting world hunger continues to be the matter of vital importance according to a recent report from the World Health Organization，more people now die from being overweight，or say，from being extremely fat，than from being underweight．It's the good life that's more likely to kill us these days．
Worse still，nearly 18 million children under the age of five around the world are estimated to be overweight．What's going on？
We really don't have many excuses for our weight problems．The dangers of the problem have been drilled into us by public-health campaigns since 2001 and the message is getting through-up to a point．
In the 1970s，Finland，for example，had the highest rate of heart disease in the world and being overweight was its main cause．Not any more．A public-health campaign has greatly reduced the number of heart disease deaths by 80 percent over the past three decades．
Maybe that explains why the percentage of people in Finland taking diet pills doubled between 2001 and 2005，and doctors even offer surgery of removing fat inside and change the shape of the body．That has become a sort of fashion．No wonder it ranks as the world's most body-conscious country．
We know what we should be doing to lose weight-but actually doing it is another matter．By far the most popular excuse is not taking enough exercise．More than half of us admit we lack willpower．Others blame good food．They say：it's just too inviting and it makes them overeat．Still others lay the blame on the Americans，complaining that pounds have piled on thanks to eating too much American-style fast food．
Some also blame their parents-their genes．But unfortunately，the parents are wronged because they're normal in shape，or rather slim．
It's a similar story around the world，although people are relatively unlikely to have tried to lose weight．Parents are eager to see their kids shape up．Do as I say-not as I do．

28．What's the"strange"point mentioned in the first sentence？B
A．Starvation is taking more people's lives in the world．
B．The good life is a greater risk than the bad life．
C．WHO report shows people's unawareness of food safety．
D．Overweight issue remains unresolved despite WHO's efforts．
29．Why does the author think that people have no excuse for being overweight？C
A．Body image has nothing to do with good food．
B．A lot of effective diet pills are available．
C．They have been made fully aware of its dangers．
D．There are too many overweight people in the world．
30．The example of Finland is used to illustrateC．
A．there are too many overweight people in the world
B．the cause of heart disease        
C．the effectiveness of a campaign
D．the fashion of body shaping
31．Which would be the best title for the passage？B
A．Overweight or Underweight
B．Actions or Excuses   
C．WHO in a Dilemma
D．No Longer Dying of Hunger．
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（37）B
If you sense something different about the way your friend is acting-maybe he's not smiling much these days，for instance-trust your feelings and reach out．"Try saying，‘I see these things．I care about you．Can I be of help？'"Van Dahlen says．
He's unusually unhappy or annoyed．
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A．He's acting a bit more withdrawn．
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E．It's a constant effort to bring into the open discussions about mental health，
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2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的间用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
In ancient times，people's transportation means were their foot．So it was rather difficult for them to travel from one place to another．As a result，they know few things about the outside world．The world was too big for them to understand it．
With science and technology developed rapidly，more and more transportation means appear，such as bicycles，buses，cars，trains，ships and planes，that carry goods and passengers to and from every comer of the world．And they shorten the distance among people．With the help of these modem facilities，people from all over the world can get in constantly touch with each other．So it is much easy for people from different nations to understand each other but communicate with each other．Thus the world is getting smaller and smaller，just like big family．
9．请阅读下面短文，并按要求以Our Life Rests on Our Choice为题，用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．
Life is a matter of choice．Seemingly，it means a choice of concrete （具体的） things．But in fact，it means choosing a way of life．Life is to be lived and enjoyed，not to be wasted or complained about．
Hardly can we forget the time when our society faced the threat from the life-and death disease---SARS．Yet，even during those dreadful times，some suffering people remained optimistic．Instead of wearing white masks，some people turned to colorful ones，and thus displayed a happy mood．And some creative people dubbed SARS to mean"SMILE AND REMAIN SMILING．"People who survive these kinds of circumstances decide in their minds to carry on in spite of the hardships．
Although we cannot choose our appearance，inborn gifts and even avoid unexpected disasters and adversities （逆境），we do have the right to choose to live optimistically，to love our lives，to have dreams，and to cherish hopes．
Every morning when we get up，we have a choice of how we want to approach life that day．
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词写出上文的概要；
2．用约120个词就"Our Life Rests on Our Choice"谈谈你的看法和感受，内容包括：
（1）简要叙述你对"Our Life Rests on Our Choice"的理解；
（2）请举例说明你会选择怎样的人生态度；
（3）简要叙述你这样选择的理由．（至少2点）
【写作要求】
1．阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接饮用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．
Our Life Rests on Our Choice
Faced with disasters and adversities，some people choose to stay optimistic and determine to carry on regardless of the hardships．Life，to some extent，rests on our choice．
Life is full of ups and downs．When the time comes for us to make choices，we should be aware of the importance of a positive attitude．A positive attitude somehow resembles the sail of a ship，which offers us the right direction．
As a teenager，it is of great significance to t ake a positive attitude towards life．To stay energetic，I will stick to an exercise schedule．I will also keep myself informed of the current events and communicate more with others，becoming socially connected．
All these mentioned above will be beneficial for me to grow into an optimistic and confident young man．Only by doing so can I adjust myself to society more easily and stay motivated towards a better life．（150 words）．
6．As soon as he comes back，I'll tell him when      and see him．（　　）
A．you will comeB．will you comeC．you comeD．do you come
7．He has made greatcontributions（贡献）to a space development program．

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