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8．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station．I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people．Before long，a train inspector comes to check out tickets．A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset．Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner．The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success．
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before．Yet，they had so quickly offered the strangers their help．If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in．

分析 本文主要讲述作者在火车上的经历．当列车员过来检票时，一位乘客找不到自己的票，车箱时每个人都帮助他找票，这张票最终是在它的主人几排后面的座位下面被找到的．因此，作者认为如果我们向那些需要帮助的人表示关心，这个世界就会变得更美好．

解答 I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station．I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people．Before long，a train inspector comes to check out tickets．A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset．Then everyone in the carriage began searching∧the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner．The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success．
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before．Yet，they had so quickly offered the strangers their help．If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in．
详解：
1．去掉had 考查动词时态．此处只需一般过去式来描述过去的动作，而并没有体现这个动作发生在某个过去的动作之前．
2．noise改为noisy 考查形容词．be动词后用形容词作表语．
3．comes改为came 考查动词时态．此处是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时．
4．but改为and 考查连词．上下文之间是顺接关系，用and．but表示上下文之间的转折关系．
5．加for 考查词语用法．Search for+n．意为"寻找某物"，search somewhere for sth．意为"在某地寻找某物"．
6．his改为its/the 考查代词或定冠词．根据句意：这张票最终是在它的主人几排后面的座位下面被找到的．its指代the ticket．
7．a改为the 考查冠词．使用定冠词the特指上文提及的同一事物，本文中特指前面提及的那张票．
8．previous改为previously 考查副词．使用副词previously作状语，修饰谓语动词speak．
9．strangers改为stranger 考查名词．本句中的陌生人就是指那张票的主人，是一个单数形式．
10．on改为in 考查介词．in need意为"在困难中，在危难时"，是固定搭配．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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