Question

【题目】请阅读以下材料，并按要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。

Are you in favor of the ipad in class？（Surveyed in Enfield School）	"The main advantage of having iPads in our classroom is the improvement in communication.” ---Annc，a student aged1710%
	I'm not ready to let go of my traditional way of teaching. Besides，can I trust my students not to play with the machine in class？" ---Jen Foster，a teacher aged48

（写作内容）

1. 用约30个单词概述饼状图的主要内容：

2. 用约120个单词阐述你对“课堂上使用平板电脑”的看法，并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。（文字部分仅供参考）

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称：

3. 不必写标题。

（评分标准）

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】Whether the iPad should be used in class has raised much concern in Enfield School. 58% of people are in favor of it while 32%are opposed to it. （29 words）

In my opinion，I subscribe to the idea that the iPad in class can be beneficial to both students and teachers. Firstly，the use of the iPad has encouraged greater communication between them. Students can share their individual ideas in class timely and vividly，which can be easily collected by their teachers. Secondly，students can have endless access to valuable learning resources such as an electronic dictionary. Finally，the interactive technology can make the teaching more efficient. Students can get instant feedback from their teachers and teachers can be aware of their students' performances in class.

To conclude，so long as we adopt effective measures to ensure its benefits，the introduction of the iPad will make great contributions to our class. （121 words）

Possible version two：

According to a survey conducted in Enfield School，58% of he people are in favor of the iPad in class while some others say no to it，accounting for 32%. （30 words）

As far as I'm conducted，the use of the iPad in class has some potential problems. First of all some interesting contents in the iPad may appeal to the students，which tend to draw their attention from the class. Besides, many teachers, who have been accustomed to the traditional way of teaching, find it very hard to make adaptations and use the iPad in their class. What's worse, spending much time on the screen of the iPad will do harm to the students' eyesight.

In conclusion, he introduction of the iPad in class isn't necessarily a good choice to make the teaching more efficient. We should give it a second thought before we try to use it in our class.

【解析】

本文是一篇任务型写作。

这篇任务型写作共分两个任务：第一个任务是用约30个单词概述饼状图的主要内容；第二个任务用约120个单词阐述你对“课堂上使用平板电脑”的看法，并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。第二部分给出了写作提纲。注意完成第一任务时，语言使用应简练、准确、到位。在第二个任务中，应涵盖题目所列出的要点。本文应主要使用一般现在时态。写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。