Question

【题目】临近期末，高一同学即将面临着文理分科的选择。假定你是李华，你同学Lucy给你来信说到了她对文理科选择的困扰和焦虑。请你给她回信，安抚她的情绪并提出你的看法和建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右; 书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 内容要点：

① 安抚她的情绪，劝她不必过于纠结；

② 提出参考意见：认清自己兴趣和优势，不盲从他人；向高年级的同学请教 ……

③ 提出看法：无论作何选择都要努力才能实现自己的期望。

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

可能用到的词汇：焦虑anxiety；理性地 rationally；不辜负 live up to

Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science. Actually, many senior 1 students have the same aniexty and problem as you. But if we can deal with them rationally, there is nothing to worry.

When it comes to choosing between arts and science, the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths. Never follow others blindly! Besides, it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students, who have previous experience and lesson. Finally, whichever we choose, please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expection and choice.

I hope my ideas can help you. Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇开放性作文。本次作文要求根据Lucy给你来信说到了她对文理科选择的困扰和焦虑问题，进行安抚，并提出你的看法和建议。

。要点包括：① 安抚她的情绪，劝她不必过于纠结；

② 提出参考意见：认清自己兴趣和优势，不盲从他人；向高年级的同学请教 ……

③ 提出看法：无论作何选择都要努力才能实现自己的期望名师点睛】

本篇范文较好地完成了文字提示中的要求，本篇全文结构紧凑，思路清晰，要点全面，语言连贯。。

写作亮点：陈述句与复杂句各交替使用，其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。

例如：文章使用状语从句whichever we choose, please keep it in mind that，if we can deal with them rationally, there is nothing to worry..。

非限制性定语从句定语从句, it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students, who have previous experience and lesson.。祈使句Never follow others blindly!

倒装句only by working hard can we live up to our expection and choice。

固定句式when it comes to sth./doing sth，……

动词不定式作表语the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths.

作者使用了moreover、in addition等串联词让各要点有机地串联在一起。使用了许多词汇，如the same …as …,　 这些语法结构的使用，说明考生运用语言的能力较强。