Question

【题目】假设你叫李华,你们学校开展了“网络课堂”计划，同学们可以通过校园网互相帮助，解决学习上遇到的困难。请你根据以下要点写一封电子邮件给你的外国笔友Jason ，向他介绍“网络课堂”计划。

内容要点：

1．可以通过网络课堂结成学习互助小组；

2．可以在论坛（forum）上发帖子，讨论学习上遇到的困难；

3．定期组织活动，交流学习经验。

注意：

1．内容应包括以上所有信息。

2．词数：100-120左右。信的开头结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jason,

I’d like to tell you about the “Network Class Plan” in my school.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jason,

I'd like to tell you about the "Network Class Plan" in my school.

This plan helps us a lot. Firstly, each enables us to communicate with each other. We can form several study groups, through which we are able to share some good learning materials. We can also post some of the difficulties that we meet in our studies on the school forum. It helps us to have a discussion about our studies. As a result, our grades improve. Last but not least, we can have some activities regularly to share our good learning experiences. We all appreciate this "Network Class Plan".

Do you have such a network class in your school? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲作文。提纲作文在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。在写完全文后，还需要 通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求。本篇文章中一定要注意三大要点缺一不可，还需要选择恰当的连接词，使文章更连贯。

【亮点说明】第二段的第一句话总结这一段的主要内容，为下文做好铺垫。熟练地使用连接词，如firstly、also、as a result、Last but not least。使文章结构更清楚、紧凑。除此之外，还使用了定语从句这样的高级句型，如through which we are able to share some good learning materials.以及We can also post some of the difficulties that we meet in our studies on the school forum.。