Question

假设你是新华中学学生卜曼宜，请你根据以下要点给消费者协会(consumers' association)写一封投诉信，讲述一次糟糕的旅行。

1. 乘坐的大巴老化、车内拥挤、空调打不开、半路上还出了故障；

2. 旅馆服务差、饭菜不可口、房间小且不干净；

3. 导游更热衷于带游客购物。

4. 投诉要求：旅行社向游客道歉，改进旅游服务，退赔部分旅行费用

注意：

1. 根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

2. 准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；

3. 词数：100-120左右。开头已给出，不计词数。

Dear Sir,

I’m Bu Manyi , a Senior Three student in Xin Hua Middle School. I’m writing to complain about …

Yours,

Bu Manyi

Answer 1

Dear sir,

I am Pu ManYi. I am writing the letter to complain about my trip. During the holiday, I joined in a three-day trip organized by a travel agency. I had expected that I would have a wonderful experience. However, it turned out that the trip was a nightmare.

First, the bus we took was old and in bad condition. It was hot and crowded on the bus. When asking the driver to switch on the air-conditioner, we were told that it didn’t work. Still worse, it broke down halfway and it took several hours to repair it. After a long and tiring travel, we finally arrived at the destination, only to find that we were taken to a hotel with terrible service. The room was old, small and smelly. And the food tasted terrible. The guide also added to our unhappiness. When showing us around the attractions, the guide seemed to be more interested in persuading us to buy souvenirs, which were expensive and of bad quality.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文是一篇话题类作文。规定要点为四部分。需要注意：要合理添加内容，每个要点都要涵盖，注意语句的衔接。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【高分短语和句型】

1.it turn out that结果是，证明是。

2. in bad condition. 状况不好

3. worse still更糟糕的是

4. 省略：When asking the driver to switch on the air-conditioner, we were told that it didn’t work.

5. 非谓语：After a long and tiring travel, we finally arrived at the destination, only to find that we were taken to a hotel with terrible service.