Question

12．你校将举办校报英语写作大赛，请以学生会的名义根据大赛内容拟写一份英文书面通知：
（1）大赛主题："一封家书"、"我最喜爱的老师"两个主题任选其一；
（1）字数800左右．
（3）参赛办法和截止日期．
（4）奖励办法．
注意：
（1）词数100左右．
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
（3）开头语和结束语已为你写好．
Notice
Here is good news for you．
In order to improve the students'English writing，an English writing contest will be held by the school newspaper．If you are interested in English writing，please take an active part in it．You have two following themes to choose from．You can write a letter home，telling your parents the life and studies in our school and showing your gratitude to them．Or you can choose to write a composition about your favorite teacher in which you describe his or her good quality and speciality．The words should be around 800．Please email your composition to writingcompetition@126．com before May 22nd，2016．We will invite the foreign teachers to work as judges．The winners will be given a pleasant gift and their compositions will be published on the school newspaper and recommended to English newspapers and magazines for publications．
We are looking forward to your participation．
The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 这是一份英文书面通知，根据题目要求可知用第一人称，用一般现在时态表示比赛目的，参赛办法和截止日期；用一般将来时表示奖励办法．内容包括：一比赛目的；二参赛办法和截止日期；三奖励办法．
高分句型：
1．You can write a letter home，telling your parents the life and studies in our school and showing your gratitude to them．句子里telling your parents the life and studies in our school 和 showing your gratitude to them做伴随状语，和主语You之间是主动关系．
你可以写信回家，告诉父母你在学校的学习和生活，对他们表示你的感激．
2．Or you can choose to write a composition about your favorite teacher in which you describe his or her good quality and speciality．句子里in which 引导定语从句，代指先行词a composition．
或者你选择写一篇关于你最喜欢的老师的作文，在作文里，你可以描写他的好品质和特别的特点．

解答 Notice
      Here is good news for you． In order to improve the students'English writing，an English writing contest will be held by the school newspaper．（比赛目的）If you are interested in English writing，please take an active part in it．You have two following themes to choose from．You can write a letter home，telling your parents the life and studies in our school and showing your gratitude to them．【高分句型一】Or you can choose to write a composition about your favorite teacher in which you describe his or her good quality and speciality．【高分句型二】The words should be around 800．Please email your composition to writingcompetition@126．com before May 22nd，2016．（参赛办法和截止日期）We will invite the foreign teachers to work as judges．The winners will be given a pleasant gift and their compositions will be published on the school newspaper and recommended to English newspapers and magazines for publications．（奖励办法）
      We are looking forward to your participation．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  The Students'Union

点评 考查提纲类作文．
在写作文时，有的考生一味追求文章的完美而千篇一律地用结构复杂的句型，从而使得文章变的过于华丽反而显得冗长拖沓，就像是文言文般的"咬文嚼字"，让评卷教师感到"不太舒服"从而影响作文的得分，适得其反．长句短句各有千秋，简单句复合句也是各有特色：长句能够增加要点的内涵，使得句子"枝繁叶茂"，但使用不当会有失精准，运用起来不够灵活；不失时机地插入短句，会让文章长短有致，既达到了结构上的要求，有符合表达意义上的要求．