Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In order to live happy, we should keep in good health. Personally, to stay healthy, we should do as follows. Firstly, taking exercise regularly. We can do sports such as swimming, running and playing the basketball. Such sports keep us energetic and also makes us happy. Secondly, they should develop a good lifestyle. Going to bed early and get up early can be helpful. Finally, we need to have a healthy and balancing diet. It is bad for us to eat a lot chocolate or meat, that contains much sugar and fat. It is necessary that one should eat various kind of healthy food such as fish, eggs, vegetables and fruits.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】one can’t live happy…----happily

【2】Firstly, taking exercise regularly…---take

【3】playing the basketball…----删除the

【4】and also makes us happy…----make

【5】they should--we

【6】and get up early…---getting

【7】and balancing diet…---balanced

【8】to eat a lot chocolate…---lot和chocolate之间添加of

【9】that contains…---which

【10】various kind of…---kinds

【解析】

【1】one can’t live happy…----happily考察副词。happily修饰动词live。

【2】Firstly, taking exercise regularly…---take 考察动词。动词原形引导祈使句。

【3】playing the basketball…----删除the考察冠词。三餐球类面前不加the。

【4】and also makes us happy…----make考察动词原形。主语是复数形式。

【5】they should--we考察人称代词。句意是我们应该有一个好的生活方式。

【6】and get up early…---getting考察动名词。and前后应并列。

【7】and balancing diet…---balanced 句意是我们应该保持饮食平衡。

【8】to eat a lot chocolate…---lot和chocolate之间添加of。考察介词。a lot of是固定搭配，表示“大量”。

【9】that contains…---which考察引导词。Which引导非限制性定语从句。

【10】various kind of…---kinds考察名词复数。various修饰复数名词。