Question

Everyone can do something for our environment. For me,	76._______
I should try to save electricity in our daily life. For example,	77._______
if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening,	78._______
I will always remember to turn on the lights. In order to	79._______
protect our forests, I will use paper wise. I should try	80._______
to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I would	81._______
not use things like paper cup and disposable chopsticks	82._______
because they are made of wood. I believe that by doing all	83._______
these small things will improve our environment but help	84._______
make our world the much better place to live.	85._______

Answer 1

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77.our→my。代词的错误。这里与主语保持一致，用my表示“在我的日常生活中”。

78. leave 前加to。非谓语动词的错误。这里用不定式做定语修饰the last person .

79. on→off。动词短语的错误。语境表示把灯关掉而不是打开，因此用turn on。

80. wise→wisely。副词的错误。用 而不是形容词做状语表示方式。

81. would→will。时态的错误。这里与语境保持一致，用一般将来时而不是过去将来时。

82. cup→cups。名词的错误。用复数名词cups表示泛指。

83.by删除。从句子结构看，这里的v.-ing结构做句子主语，应该将介词删除。

84. but→and连词的错误。这里表示顺接和递进关系，用连词and而不是but。

85. the→a。冠词的错误。这里表示“一个更好的地方”，用a better place而不是“那个更好的地方”；注意后面的place to live是正确的，可以将掉尾介词in省略。