题目内容
【题目】Directions: Write an English composition between 100 and 120 words according to the situation given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生,你的英语老师要求写一篇周记,叙述你所经历过的一件事情,它必须体现出你的情绪变化。同时,老师还提供了如下一组表情供参考。(文中不得出现真实姓名)
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【答案】Lihua, my close friend, is a very nice student who has really given others the impression of an honest guy and many times he was honored as an excellent student in our school. I am so proud of him.
But something unhappy happened. Last week, when we were taking the mid-term English exam, I suddenly found that he was copying something from cell phone but the teacher didn’t find this at all. I didn’t know what to do,feeling upset and sad. Finally, I decided to reveal the truth, even though he is my best friend. I talked with him after the exam and pointed out that we should not cheat just for a good result, thus lose our faith. As a result, he came to realize his mistake and we went to the head teacher’s office together. I was pleased that he admitted his mistake.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于开放性作文,要求考生写一篇周记,叙述所经历过的一件事情并体现出情绪变化。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时为主
结构:总-分法
要求:1. 叙述事情的经过;
2. 体现出情绪变化。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
close friend;give sb. the impression of;many times;be honored as;be proud of;the mid-term English exam;cell phone;not…at all;decide to;even though;best friend;talk with;point out;lose faith;as a result;come to realize等
第三步:连词成句
1. Lihua, my close friend, is a very nice student who has really given others the impression of an honest guy and many times he was honored as an excellent student in our school.
2. But something unhappy happened.
3. When we were taking the mid-term English exam, I suddenly found that he was copying something from cell phone but the teacher didn’t find this at all.
4. I decided to reveal the truth even though he is my best friend.
5. I talked with him after the exam and pointed out that we should not cheat just for a good result, thus lose our faith.
6. He came to realize his mistake and we went to the head teacher’s office together.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:Finally;
2.表并列补充关系:and;
3.表转折对比关系:but;
4.表因果关系:As a result;for;thus;so等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改