Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高二（1）班学生李华。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给21世纪英文报写一封稿件，介绍上周你班同学参观北京市规划展览馆（Beijing Planning Exhibition Hall）的全过程。

注意：同数不少于60；

提示如：沙盘 urban planning model 讲解员 docent

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Friday, our class paid a visit to Beijing Planning Exhibition Hall, which opened our eyes to the continuous physical transformation of the ancient city.

The visit started with a warm welcome from a docent at the entrance, who briefly introduced the main thematic areas. Once inside, we were attracted to an exhibition that gave a vivid account of Beijing’s history. To my excitement, on a huge map I could even find what my local area was like years ago. How incredible to have hutongs transformed into high-rise buildings.

The hall displayed more than just the history of Beijing. In a documentary entitled “Beautiful Beijing”, we learned in amazement how Beijing has become a modern city with giant skyscrapers and new landmarks. Afterwards, following the docent, we came to an urban planning model which displayed a more vibrant Beijing with buildings, transportation and facilities planned for the future.

Before leaving, I left a message on the board, expressing my best wishes to my hometown. Then I headed home with a smile as well as a wonderful picture of Beijing’s future in mind.(182 words)

【解析】本文书面表达属于看图作文，要求写一封稿件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是要求写一封稿件：假设你是红星中学高二（1）班学生李华。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给21世纪英文报写一封稿件，介绍上周你班同学参观北京市规划展览馆（Beijing Planning Exhibition Hall）的全过程。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：Beijing Planning Exhibition Hall（北京市规划展览馆）； urban planning model沙盘；docent讲解员；To my excitement（使某人兴奋的是）；transformed into（被改造成）；left a message on the board（在留言板上留下信息）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，符合图画内容，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。