Question

【题目】书面表达

根据以下图画再结合你的想象，写出一篇120字左右的短文：

Answer 1

【答案】

It is the old man’s birthday today. Now he is sitting on a sofa alone. Maybe his wife has been dead. On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son. And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left. Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy. Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely.

Our life is getting better and better than before. Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink. I think they are quite wrong. Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do. So we should spend as much time together with them as we can and take care of them in every possible way.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇看图写作，根据以下图画再结合你的想象，写出一篇120字左右的短文。写作前一定要读懂所给图，要把图中所要表达的意思全部表达出来。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】

On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son. And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left.过去分词后置定语；Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely. 句中运用原因状语从句；Our life is getting better and better than before.形容词比较级巧妙使用；Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink.宾语从句和条件状语从句在句中完美结合；Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do.原因状语从句和动词不定式做后置定语；So we should spend as much time together with them as we can and take care of them in every possible way.句中恰到好处地运用了as --- as we can结构。