Question

火热的高三就在眼前，你准备好了吗？或许有时候，我们还可以向蚂蚁取取经呢！请根据以下提示，并结合你生活中的事例，用英语写一篇短文。

The ant philosophy is: never give up, look ahead and do whatever you can.

注意：①无须写标题；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总字数。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

It is universally acknowledged that only with perseverance and optimism can we achieve our goals.

Take my own experience for example. There was a time when I suddenly became interested in playing badminton, but some of my classmates laughed at me saying that I would never play badminton well because I was too fat. No matter what they said, I just kept on practicing almost every day after school. In order to improve my skill, I even consulted some professional players. With two years passing by, I won the champion of our school sports meeting. All the students and teachers congratulated me on my success. Moreover, I became slim and much healthier.

From my experience, I am firmly convinced that it was my determination, self-confidence and never giving-up that help me achieve my success.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求根据提示，结合生活中的事例，用英语写一篇短文。写作前首先要正确理解提示信息“The ant philosophy is: never give up, look ahead and do whatever you can.”，挖掘要点，发挥想象来进行写作。提炼到的要点应该是遇到困难挫折不放弃，要对未来充满希望，脚踏实地工作。文章首先可以提出蚂蚁的哲学，然后亮出自己的观点，再结合事例进行论证。写作时文章应该用第一人称，使用一般现在时，讲解事例时应该使用一般过去时。注意高级词汇和多种句式的使用，这是文章的得分点所在。

【亮点说明】本文使用了议论文常见的写作模式-----三段式结构，首先提出论点only with perseverance and optimism can we achieve our goals.，然后用自己的经历来论证，最后归纳总结。文中使用了定语从句There was a time when I suddenly became interested in playing badminton,，让步状语从句No matter what they said,和倒装句only with perseverance and optimism can we achieve our goals.强调句型it was my determination, self-confidence and never giving-up that help me achieve my success.等，增加了文章的亮点。

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