Question

【题目】假如你是王伟，上周末你和家人参观了北京的颐和园。请根据提示给你的美国朋友Mike写一封电子邮件，介绍你的旅游经历。内容主要包括：
1). 出发时间：上周六早上7点；
2). 准备物品：零食、衣服、照相机、雨伞等；
3). 交通方式：乘公交；
4). 主要活动：游览昆明湖、佛香阁(Tower of Buddhist Incense)、17孔桥(17-Arch Bridge)和石坊(Stone Archway)等景点，并拍照；
5). 你的感受。
注意:1).词数100左右（开头语已给出，但不计入总词数）；
2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I am writing to tell you about my trip last weekend. My family and I went to the Summer Palace for a holiday.
Yours,
Wang Wei

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I am writing to tell you about my trip last weekend. My family and I went to the Summer Palace for a holiday.

We packed our digital camera, some snacks, clothes, umbrellas and things like that. Then we started at 7 on Saturday morning. We took a bus there because public transport is very convenient.

The most exciting thing was to tour around the Kunming Lake on a beautiful dragon boat, where we spent about two hours chatting and laughing in the bright sunshine. When we climbed onto the top of the Tower of Buddhist Incense, a wonderful view of the lake came into our sight. After lunch we walked on the 17-Arch Bridge and visited the Stone Archway and we took many wonderful pictures.

My trip to the Summer Palace is unforgettable because the scenery is fantastic. No wonder it attracts thousands of tourists every day.

Yours

Wang Wei

【解析】本题是一封英文信件，要求考生以王伟的身份，给美国朋友Mike写一封电子邮件，写作内容已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1). 出发时间：上周六早上7点；2). 准备物品：零食、衣服、照相机、雨伞等；3). 交通方式：乘公交；4). 主要活动：游览昆明湖、佛香阁(Tower of Buddhist Incense)、17孔桥(17-Arch Bridge)和石坊(Stone Archway)等景点，并拍照；5). 你的感受。写作时要注意确定时态，表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。