题目内容
【题目】SECTION C 写作(满分25分)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
最近,某英文报就“如何处理师生间的矛盾”发起了一个专题讨论。假设你是李华,请你写一篇不少于120词的短文阐述自己的观点。内容包括以下要点:
1. 师生间冲突时有发生,并举例说明;
2. 造成冲突的原因;
3. 解决的方法。
【答案】Dear Editor,
It is very common that conflicts between teachers and students often happen. For example, a girl in our class didn’t hand in her homework yesterday and was criticized by our English teacher. She felt it was unfair to be treated like that and talked back to the teacher, which made the teacher very angry. Later, it turned out that the girl didn’t feel well the day before yesterday so she couldn’t finish her homework.
So in most cases, conflicts between people come from misunderstanding. If the girl had realized that the teacher acted so just for her sake, or the teacher had first asked the girl why she didn’t finish her homework, the conflict would have been avoided. So teachers and students should communicate more and understand each other.
In my opinion, putting yourself in others’ shoes is the key to avoiding conflicts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】范文围绕如何处理师生间的冲突展开讨论,是典型的三段论。第一段第一句用It is very common that从句说明师生间发生冲突是普遍现象。紧接着通过举例来说明。本段用了which的非限定性定语从句,so引导的结果状语从句以及被动语态。第二段解释了造成冲突的原因。本段第二句用了If的虚拟语气If the girl had realized…. the teacher had first asked the gir……l the conflict would have been avoided. 在if的条件句中还包含that和why引导的宾语从句。最后一段针对这种现象,作者提出了自己的观点。用了表明观点的短语In my opinion,以及一个the key to doing。总体来说范文要点齐全,写作层次清晰,紧扣要点,句式多变,能够正确运用各种复合句