Question

6．假如你是李华，你的英国网友Henry来信说他在周末帮助父母做家务时，不小心被开水烫伤，需休息几周．请你给他发一封电子邮件．主要内容包括：
（1）表示同情；
（2）对康复期间的建议：（如烫伤注意事项，如何打发无聊时光等，并给出理由）；
（3）表达你的祝愿．
注意：（1）词数：100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Henry，
I'm sorry to hear thatyou got burnt while assisting your parents to do housework and that you need to take several weeks to heal at home．（高分句型一）It was very considerate of you to help them do it at weekends．Here are some of my suggestions which are beneficial to your recovery．
During your recovery，for one thing，pay attention to not rubbing your wounds，otherwise they may get infected．（高分句型二）For another，it is definitely boring during the rest days while staying in bed．You'd better take advantage of this time to read your favourite novels or keep in touch with all your good friends through E-chat，which can keep you a good mood．（高分句型三）
I hope that you can take good care of yourself．I am convinced that only after you do as I have told you to will you be well soon．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你的英国网友Henry来信说他在周末帮助父母做家务时，不小心被开水烫伤，需休息几周．请你给他发一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）表示同情；（2）对康复期间的建议：（如烫伤注意事项，如何打发无聊时光等，并给出理由）；（3）表达你的祝愿． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：do housework做家务；at weekends在周末；are beneficial to对…有益；for one thing一方面；For another
另一方面；take advantage of 利用；take good care of 照顾；
I'm sorry to hear that you got burnt while assisting your parents to do housework and that you need to take several weeks to heal at home．（高分句型一）
During your recovery，for one thing，pay attention to not rubbing your wounds，otherwise they may get infected．（高分句型二）
You'd better take advantage of this time to read your favourite novels or keep in touch with all your good friends through E-chat，which can keep you a good mood．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Henry，
       I'm sorry to hear that you got burnt while assisting your parents to do housework and that you need to take several weeks to heal at home．（高分句型一）It was very considerate of you to help them do it at weekends．Here are some of my suggestions which are beneficial to your recovery．
      During your recovery，for one thing，pay attention to not rubbing your wounds，otherwise they may get infected．（高分句型二）For another，it is definitely boring during the rest days while staying in bed．You'd better take advantage of this time to read your favourite novels or keep in touch with all your good friends through E-chat，which can keep you a good mood．（高分句型三）
       I hope that you can take good care of yourself．I am convinced that only after you do as  I have told you to will you be well soon．
       Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li  Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．