题目内容
【题目】书面表达
前不久,你校学生会向高三学生发出倡议;十八岁的生日时,请为你们的父母做一件有意义的事。同学们积极响应,纷纷表达自己的做法。请根据以上信息,以“Something Special For Parents”用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.描述以上有关学生会倡议的信息和同学们的反应;
2.你的做法及理由。
注意:1.词数120左右,短文的标题和首句已给出(不计人总词数);
2.可以适当增加内容;
3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Something Special For Parents
Not long ago Student Union in our school advocated that…
【答案】
Something Special For Parents
Not long ago, Student Union in our school advocated that Senior Three students should do something special for their parents on the 18th birthday. All the students were actively in response to it and most of them have come up with their ideas. Some choose to write a letter, saying it's the best way to express their appreciation as well as love for their dearest parents. Others prefer to cook a big meal to show that they've already grown up.
As for me, I tend to do up hair, wash feet and cut finger-nails for my parents. By doing what parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they devote to bringing me up. Also, being eighteen years old means it's time that I should take responsibility to take care of them.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于应用文,同时也是半开放性短文。倡议学生在十八岁生日时为父母亲做一件有意义的事情。给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化。本文在叙述个人做法时可以选择实际发生的事情,这样有话可说。
【亮点说明】这篇范文中作者使用了多变的句式,如动名词短语充当主语:Also, being eighteen years old means it's time that I should take responsibility to take care of them.该句中还含有It’s time的虚拟语气句式。再如非谓语动词的运用:Some choose to write a letter, saying it's the best way to express their appreciation as well as love for their dearest parents.