题目内容
13.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Rose wanted a job.She went to many offices and she didn't like any of them.One day she saw a board in an office read:"This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words in a minute."Rose was very exciting.When Rose went to the manager's office,the man was writing something.Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head."Do you need a typist?"asked Rose."Yes!"he said.Rose clapped her hand.She couldn't help saying,"OK!How much will you pay for me every month?"The manager thought for a while and said,"I will pay you 75 dollars for first three months.Then I will pay you 50 dollars every month."Rose smlied and answer,"Great!I will come and work here three months late."The manager was speechless.
分析 本文写了Rose好工作的经历,她看到一个板子上个广告去一家公司应聘.
解答 Rose wanted a job.She went to many offices and she didn't like any of them.One day she saw a board in an office read:"This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words in a minute."Rose was very exciting.When Rose went to the manager's office,the man was writing something.Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head."Do you need a typist?"asked Rose."Yes!"he said.Rose clapped her hand.She couldn't help saying,"OK!How much will you pay for me every month?"The manager thought for a while and said,"I will pay you 75 dollars for∧first three months.Then I will pay you 50 dollars every month."Rose smlied and answer,"Great!I will come and work here three months late."The manager was speechless.
71.and改为but 考查连词.上下文是转折关系,她去了很多地方,但是都不喜欢那里的工作.
72.read改为reading 考查非谓语.现在分词reading短语修饰名词a board,指板上写着….
73.:whom改为who 考查定语从句.本句中的定语从句中缺少的是主语,而whom只能做宾语.
74.exciting改为excited考查形容词. 形容词excited是对人的情况进行的说明.
75.he改为she 考查代词.根据上句中的raised her head可知经理是一个女性.
76.hand改为hands 考查常识题.拍手应该使用两只手,故使用复数形式.
77.去掉for 考查固定短语. 动词pay可以作为及物动词,直接加宾语,pay sb付钱给某人.
78.for后面加the考查冠词,序数词first后跟定冠词the,for the first three months 指的是前三个月.
79.answer改为answered 考查时态.动词answered与前面的smiled是并列关系,故都使用过去式.
80.late改为later 考查固定搭配.固定搭配"一段时间+later"表示"一段时间以后".
点评 本题考查较为细致,要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致,时态是否一致.各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型,固定短语的应用.一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子,这类题型考察基础知识较多.平时应注重积累,熟记一些句型及惯用结构.修改前先细读短文,标出出错的位置,改完以后还得细读短文,看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺,符合逻辑.
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A. | Besides | B. | Otherwise | C. | Somehow | D. | Though |
A recent study found that some people could be(43)C to their cell phones.The study was conducted at Staffordshire University in England.About 40percent of students (44)A said they couldn't do without their cell phones.About 90% said they took their (45)B with them everywhere.One third of students surveyed said they used cell phones to (46)B themselves up.
The study also asked students 18to 25questions designed to(47)D addictive behavior.The results found that one in six cell phone users have a lot in(48)D with gambling addicts (赌瘾).Some people said they sometimes lied about their cell phone use.(49)B admitted stealing to pay for their cell phone habit.
Dr David Sheffield,(50)A conducted the study,said he wasn't surprised by the (51)C."Students use their phones (52)D,and this has both positive (53)A such as staying in touch with friends and family,and negative ones too,such as (54)A costs and social costs,"he told Weekly Reader."The most (55)B finding was that a number of people reported they had (56)D a relationship or job because they spent too much time on mobile phones."
(57)C part of the study,some students agreed to take a (58)A from their cell phones.After three phone-free days,students reported feeling less (59)B about their daily lives.That might be a (60)C reason to hang up the phone!
41.A.must | B.mustn't | C.can | D.can't |
42.A.problem | B.disease | C.question | D.trouble |
43.A.pleased | B.crazy | C.devoted | D.interested |
44.A.surveyed | B.examined | C.checked | D.tested |
45.A.books | B.phones | C.notes | D.pens |
46.A.show | B.cheer | C.pick | D.take |
47.A.change | B.form | C.develop | D.check |
48.A.correction | B.relation | C.touch | D.common |
49.A.Other | B.Others | C.The others | D.The other |
50.A.who | B.which | C.that | D.what |
51.A.discoveries | B.explorations | C.results | D.experiments |
52.A.carefully | B.briefly | C.hardly | D.frequently |
53.A.effects | B.points | C.decisions | D.ideas |
54.A.financial | B.physical | C.national | D.natural |
55.A.interesting | B.surprising | C.exciting | D.pleasing |
56.A.founded | B.earned | C.built | D.lost |
57.A.For | B.By | C.As | D.Of |
58.A.break | B.chance | C.risk | D.fortune |
59.A.encouraged | B.stressed | C.satisfied | D.inspired |
60.A.funny | B.strange | C.good | D.wrong |
In Pressure,(27)A struggled to be the very best.When women gave birth,they would (28)C to have the baby with the loudest cry.There was violent competition in every aspect of life.Because (29)D was the index (指数) of success,people were (30)B busy making money,with (31)D for relaxation.Some young people couldn't bear the intensity and resorted to drink or drugs to escape.(32)A,over in Pleasure,the motto was"As long as you like it,do it."People grew up without (33)B and (34)C do anything they liked.Children played computer games day and night.At school,teachers didn't (35)D whether students showed up or not.Workers might sit around the office (36)C sipping coffee and doing nothing.(37)A the lack of regulations,nobody worried about losing their jobs.It was (38)C that mattered.No one had the(39)B thought of moving forward,either for themselves or for the town.The computers they used were (40)Amodels from Pressure.
Some of the young were addicted to (41)D because of the meaninglessness of their lives.Then,people in the two towns began asking themselves,"What is(42)B for?"But,just before life in the two towns completely (43)B,there came a saint-Mr.Reason.He went from door to door,talking with people and giving advice.People in Pressure learnt to be (44)A with what they had,while people in Pleasure began to make plans.They (45)C the walls between them and built a road to connect the two.The towns'people came to realize the truth-there is no space between Pressure and Pleasure if they don't go to extremes.
26.A.connect | B.keep | C.go out | D.prevent |
27.A.everyone | B.anyone | C.nobody | D.somebody |
28.A.have | B.like | C.compete | D.try |
29.A.health | B.joy | C.children | D.wealth |
30.A.seldom | B.always | C.hardly | D.sometimes |
31.A.much time | B.no reason | C.many reasons | D.no time |
32.A.Meanwhile | B.At the same time | C.Therefore | D.Virtually |
33.A.pleasure | B.pressure | C.work | D.happiness |
34.A.must | B.need | C.could | D.dared |
35.A.know | B.find | C.recognize | D.care |
36.A.in the morning | B.in the evening | C.all day long | D.in the afternoon |
37.A.Thanks to | B.Regardless of | C.Owe to | D.According to |
38.A.money | B.time | C.pleasure | D.pressure |
39.A.strongest | B.slightest | C.most | D.smallest |
40.A.the old | B.the new | C.the best | D.the same |
41.A.books | B.work | C.money | D.drugs |
42.A.pressure | B.life | C.pleasure | D.money |
43.A.improved | B.failed | C.succeeded | D.lived |
44.A.content | B.surprised | C.patient | D.angry |
45.A.built | B.put down | C.pulled down | D.set up |