Question

11．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
注意：原行没有错的不要改．
In recent years，online shopping has become a new trend
between young consumers．Online shopping is fast and convenient.76．among 
The online shops sell a wide range of producats at a relative low price.77．relatively 
But on the other hand，it has some disadvantages.78．√ 
First，while shop，we cannot check the goods in person，79．shopping 
so the quality of the goods is guaranteed．Second，80．is后面加not 
when you pay through the online banks，some hackers may steal                    81．we 
our persoual informations，which will cause serious financial loss.82．information
Third，some advtisements on the Internet is unreliable，83．are
which will lead to the castomers to be easily cheated.84．去掉第一个to 
In my opinion，we must think twice after we decide                                           85．before
to purchases goods on sale on the Internet．

Answer 1

分析 本段文字讲到最近几年网上购物在年轻人当中成为一种新趋势．不可否认网上购物快捷方便，价格低廉，但它同时也存在弊端．首先网上购物是我们不能亲自当面验货，商品质量很难保证；其次通过网上银行支付时我们的个人信息有可能被窃取，导致经济损失；另外网络上的有些广告不可靠，消费者很容易受骗．所以作者认为，网上购物之前一定要多加考虑．

解答 In recent years，online shopping has become a new trend
between young consumers．Online shopping is fast and convenient.76．between改为among
The online shops sell a wide range of producats at a relative low price.77．relative改为relatively
But on the other hand，it has some disadvantages.78．√
First，while shop，we cannot check the goods in person，79．shop改为shopping
so the quality of the goods is∧guaranteed．Second，80．is后面加not
when you pay through the online banks，some hackers may steal   81．you改为we
our persoual informations，which will cause serious financial loss.82．informations改为information
Third，some advtisements on the Internet isunreliable，83．is改为are
which will lead to the castomers to be easily cheated.84．去掉第一个to
In my opinion，we must think twice afterwe decide          85．after改为before
to purchases goods on sale on the Internet．
 
76．between改为among；考查介词，among指在三者或三者以上的同类事物之间，among between 多指两者之间，句子中young consumers应指很多人，所以用among．
 77．relative改为relatively；考查副词，这里需要修饰的是形容词low，所以要用副词形式relatively．
 78．√
 79．shop改为shopping；考查while的用法，这是一个省略句，省略了从句主语和be动词 英语中有规则，从句主语和主句主语一致时，可以省略从句中的主语和be动词，完整的
       句子应为while we are shopping，we can not…这里省略了we are，即while shopping．
 80．is后面加not；考查句意，根据上下文这里句意应是否定的，"商品质量很难保证"，所以is后面加not．
 81．you改为we；考查人称代词，
 82．informations改为information；考查名词，information作为"消息，信息"讲是不可数名词，所以不能加s．
 83．is改为are；考查主谓一致，句子的主语some advtisements 是复数形式，所以谓语动词用复数．
 84．去掉第一个to；考查to的用法，lead to中to是介词，lead sb to do中to为不定式，意思是"引导/诱使某人干某事"．
 85．after改为before；考查介词，根据上下文意思，这句应该为"决定在网上买东西之前要多加考虑"，所以应该用before．

点评 短文改错时要先整体把握文章的中心思想，确定文章的基本时态和语态，再从细节上分析句子成分，运用所掌握的句型，短语，语法等基本语言知识找出文章中的错误并加以修改．