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10.第一节短文改错(共1小题;每小题10分,满分10分)下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.增加:在缺词处加一个漏洞符号(/\),并在其下面写上该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.Should I choose a good major and a good university?Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested.It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future.However,those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one's development.They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job.In my opinion,the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university.But if we can obtain both,the first thing to consider is a good major,because no matter where we study,they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.

分析 本文作者主要针对已经考上大学的高三毕业生是选择好专业还是选择好大学的问题,在陈述了一些学生的不同观点的同时,也表明了自己的看法,并说明了其中的原因.

解答 Senior threestudentwill face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.
                  students                                                   去掉by 
Should I choose a good majoranda good university?Some students prefer to consider majors first
                                           or
so that they can learn what they are interested∧.It will also make it possibly for them to take their 
                                                                  in                                possible 
favorite jobs in the future.However,those who think differently believes that the environment is 
                                                                                                  believe
important to one's development.They also believe that students∧graduate from leading universities 
                                                                                           graduating或graduate前加who  
are often more likely to find a good job.In my opinion,the best choice is to choose a good major
at a good university.But if we can obtain both,the first thing to consider is a good major,
                                         can't或can后加not
because no matter where we study,theycan still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.
                                                     we                                        a
答案:
1.把student改为students    考查名词的单复数    此处指的是:面临高考的高三的学生,故用复数名词students
2.去掉by    考查介词"pass by"意为:经过,路过;由于此处指的是:通过大学入学考试;pass在这里是及物动词,故去掉by
3.把and改为or     考查连词   本句的意思是:我应该选择一个好专业呢,还是一所好大学?此处表示选择,故用or
4.在interested之后加in    考查固定短语"be interested in"意为:对…感兴趣;故在interested之后加in   
5.把possibly 改为possible    考查固定结构"make+it+形容词+to do sth."意为:使得…怎么样;这里的意思是:这也将会使他们在未来从事他们最喜欢的工作成为可能;故用形容词possible
6.把believes 改为believe    考查主谓一致     由于此处描述的考上大学的高三毕业生的通常的想法,故用一般现在时态;本句的主语"those who think differently"指的是:那些有不同想法的学生们;故用believe
7.把graduate改为graduating或graduate前加who   考查现在分词或关系代词    此处在句中作定语,修饰前面的名词students,由于动词graduate与其逻辑主语students构成了主谓关系;故这里可以用现在分词graduating;另外,也可以将本句改为定语从句,由于先行词students(指人),在从句中作主语,故用关系代词who;故本题的答案为:把graduate改为graduating或graduate前加who  
8.把can改为can't或can后加not    考查情态动词的否定形式    根据上一句可知,此处的意思是:如果这两者(好的专业与好的大学)我们不能兼得,那么首先要考虑的应是一个好的专业;由于此处表达了否定的意义,故用情态动词的否定形式;故答案为:把can改为can't或can后加not   
9.把they改为we    考查人称的一致性    本句的意思是:因为无论我们在哪里学习,只要我们尽力,我们仍然可以在某一领域取得很多的成就;此处在句中作主语,指"我们";故用we
10.把the改为a    考查不定冠词    此处用来修饰单数名词 field,表示泛指"某一领域";故用a

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.

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