题目内容
【题目】假设你叫李华,是光明中学的一名学生。请你根据以下提示,给你初中的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信,表达对他(她)的爱戴和尊敬。词数:120字左右。
提示:
1. 对英语李老师教学的评价;
2. 回顾在校时你的心情;
3. 对老师的理解和祝愿;
信的开头已经写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Li,
I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. _______________________________________________________
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Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Li,
I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a student of Guangming Middle School. Mr. Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your hard work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations and too much homework made me sad. I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to a famous high school. Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. And now I really understand you. Are you still so busy? How I miss you!
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文写作。需要注意以下要点。
(1) 仔细审题。明确写作要求,抓住写作要点。
(2) 拟写草稿。在审题的基础上,拟写草稿,注意对关键要点覆盖全面的同时还要注意内容的丰富。
(3) 运用高级词汇和句子格式。在写作过程中要运用一些高级词汇,还要注意运用一些从句,使得句子不再单一。
【范文亮点】
定语从句。I still remember the days when you taught me English.
过去分词作定语。the pressure of examinations and too much homework made me sad.
同位语从句。I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to a famous high school.