题目内容
13.有没有想过给自己写信,尤其是给将来的自己写信.请用英语给五年后的自己写封信,信的内容包括以下三个方面:1.写信的目的;
2.给五年后的你一些忠告;
3.如何看待五年后的你.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear myself,
I have been confused for a long time,neglecting to think about the future.(高分句型一)Escaping from the future sounds abnormal.If one can not face the future how can he face the reality?Thus I decide to write this letter to you-myself,five years later.
First of all,I want to give some suggestions.Learning's light shall never dim in your life for no one can survive in this fast changing world without learning.(高分句型二)And remember:health is wealth.One can not abandon any kind of sport.Also,parents should be your first concern and deserve to be loved forever.
Besides I would like to remind you of keeping your spirits up,which are the basis of your life.
Now you are reading this letter in front of Beijing Tiananmen Square.You will be working in Beijing after graduation,being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher.(高分句型三)
Yours,
Me.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息用英语给五年后的自己写封信,信的内容包括以下三个方面,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:写信的目的;给五年后的你一些忠告;如何看待五年后的你. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:I have been confused for a long time,neglecting to think about the future.句中使用了现在分词作状语;
Learning's light shall never dim in your life for no one can survive in this fast changing world without learning.句中for是连词,引导原因状语从句
You will be working in Beijing after graduation,being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher.句中being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher属于现在分词作状语
解答 Dear myself,
I have been confused for a long time,neglecting to think about the future.(高分句型一)Escaping from the future sounds abnormal.If one can not face the future how can he face the reality?Thus I decide to write this letter to you-myself,five years later.
First of all,I want to give some suggestions.Learning's light shall never dim in your life for no one can survive in this fast changing world without learning.(高分句型二)And remember:health is wealth.One can not abandon any kind of sport.Also,parents should be your first concern and deserve to be loved forever.Besides I would like to remind you of keeping your spirits up,which are the basis of your life.
Now you are reading this letter in front of Beijing Tiananmen Square.You will be working in Beijing after graduation,being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher.(高分句型三)
Yours,
Me.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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