题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,2016年奥林匹克运动会将在巴西里约热内卢(Rio)举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容应包括:
1. 个人情况:年龄、性别、学历;
2. 个人条件:英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人等;
3. 承诺:提供最佳服务。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. _____________________________________________________
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2016 Summer Olympic Games in Brazil.
I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now. I have a good command of English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely. Besides, I have deep love for sports and I can always get along with others easily, which is especially essential for a volunteer. In addition, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed. My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.
I believe I can do a good job for the Games. Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文为应用文中的申请信。申请信要求①说明优势。客观陈述事实经历,避免表达主观见解,让人看后自己去下结论。②不要过分渲染自我。切忌过分夸大自己的能力或表现出过分的自信,尤其不要说出与事实不符的能力或特长来。③表明自己很感兴趣,说明自己的愿望,语气自信而坚定。④请求答复联系。
【亮点说明】本篇习作开篇直接点明写信的目的,使人一目了然。在写作中,以简单句为主,说明自己的实际情况和优点优势。但在词汇选择方面,则恰当地使用了多种高级词汇及短语。例如:have a good command of、have deep love for、in addition、be essential for、be ready to等等。