题目内容
【题目】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim得知你要参加CCTV《朗读者》节目的录制,来信询问相关情况。请你给Jim回信。内容包括:
1.你朗读的内容;
2.你选择上述内容的原因;
3.上述内容对你的影响。
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is it going? Thank you for your support on my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader.
The book I have chosen is “Fu Lei’s Family Letters” in which he shared his view about art and life in order to guide his son. There are two reasons why I’ve decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide. Firstly, you can feel the profound fatherly love and his efforts to guide the next generation, which I believe will touch the youngsters like me. Besides, many traditional virtues, such as integrity, can be found in his works, which can inspire students like us.
The book has an immense influence on me. Actually, it is this book that changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son. Besides, the wisdom in the book helps me shape a positive attitude towards life and future. Thus, it came to my mind the moment I got the invitation.
That’s all about it. I hope my introduction can be of some help. Is there any book that also plays an important role in your life? I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是写一篇给定内容的书信,写作话题为回复参加《朗读者》的具体内容。在写作时要注意要点齐全,并且使用合适的连接词,使上下文行文流畅;同时一定要注意行文思路要有逻辑性,使用序数词使条例看起来更清晰。同时,由于题目要求的内容比较详细,所以大家的作文整体上都是差不多的。所以想要让人眼前一亮,就要先使文章的首段与末段更加新颖,同时要注意使用简单句与复杂句结合的方法,并且同时尽量避免多次使用相同的单词与词组,使内容更加的充实。
【范文亮点】
文章开头以Thank you for your support on my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader. 引出话题,言简意赅,主旨鲜明。文章用Firstly,besides,thus这些连接词,层层递进,条理清晰。最后用That’s all about it总结,首尾呼应,文章结构紧凑。文章还用了have influence on,come to one’s mind,play an important role等高级短语让文章看起来更有料。同时这篇范文多处运用了从句,使文章结构更加的清晰,也运用了许多高级词汇,使得人眼前一亮。