题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国网友Anna在她学校举办的一次作文比赛中荣获一等奖,你写信向她表示祝贺,并在信中谈及自己在英语写作上存在的困难,希望得到她的帮助。
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和具体学校信息。
Dear Anna,
I am very glad to learn that
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Anna,
I am very glad to learn that you have won the first prize in your school's English writing contest.And I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your excellent performance.
It's a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded.How I admire your writing skills! I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening,speaking and writing.However,I find it hard to write a good composition.Although I've put a lot of efforts into it,I just can't find a way out.I feel stressed out.I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇书信类作文,文章要点已给出,考生在写邮件过程中应注意以下几点:1、书信的格式,本题中已给出,在没给出的情况下也要记得信件的开头和结尾, 要看清写作的对象是谁,明确写信人和收信人。本题中Anna为收信人,李华为写信人。
2、书信一般要开门见山,交代写信原因,便于读信者了解重点。
3、注意文章要以一定的逻辑思维顺序进行叙述,既能满足题目要求,又能把意思
表达清楚,可适当增加细节,使行文流畅。题干中要求考生在信中谈及自己在英语写作上存在的困难,希望得到她的帮助,此时可以另取一段表达考生自己在写作中遇到的困难,可例举两到三个困难,不宜过多,避免文章冗长。不同的困难中应用不同的连接词连接,例如at beginning,in the first place,at last but not least等。
【范文亮点】
第一段开门见山表达了对Anna的祝贺之情。excellent performance 精彩的表现这些重点词汇的使用会让人觉得有扎实的英语词汇基础。
How I admire your writing skills!感叹句使文章更加活泼生动,不是在死板地阐述。
appreciate it if…如果你怎么样我将会很高兴,很好地连接上下文,行文流畅通顺。