Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（n），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mandy，

Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hardbecause he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true. I work really hard， often study late into the night！I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to workas hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent

grades. It's not fair！

The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student she's had for year. WhenI told my dad，all he said was，“You mustn't waste your time in art. You must focus your mindon your lessons！”Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do now．Would you please help me out?

Thanks a lot！

Yours sincerely，

Lisa

Answer 1

【答案】【1】especial改为especially

【2】me后加to

【3】study改为studying

【4】like改为as

【5】去掉it

【6】in改为on/over

【7】puzzling改为puzzled

【解析】试题分析：如何学习和父亲发生争执，写信求助。

【1】espefial→especially 考查副词。especial→especially 此处应由副词修饰介词短语in maths。故especial改为especially。

【2】me后加to 考查非谓语动词。go前加to want后跟不定式作宾补。故go前加to。

【3】sduty→studying 考查非谓语动词。study→studying studying作work hard的伴随状语。故将study改为studying。

【4】said→says 考查时态。said→says 根据前后语境应用一般现在时，故said改为says。

【5】like→as 考查状语从句。like→as like前有as，as...as...连接比较状语从句，故like改为as。

【6】and→but 考查连词。and→but 前后分句是转折关系，应将and改为but。

【7】it去掉 考查定语从句。去掉it I like是thing的定语从句，引导词that作like的宾语已经省略，不能再出现it作宾语，故去掉it。

【8】year→years 考查名词。year→years for years好多年。故将year改为years。

【9】in→on 考查介词。in→on/over waste time on/over sth.在某事上浪费时间。故in改为on/over。

【10】puzzling→puzzled 考查形容词。puzzling→puzzled 主语是I，应用puzzled作表语，“感到迷惑的”，故将puzzling改为puzzled。

【知识归纳】

表示情感的现在分词和过去分词

surprising令人惊讶的，surprised感到惊讶；frightening令人害怕的， frightened感到害怕； moving令人感动的， moved 感动；exciting 令人兴奋的，excited 感到兴奋；boring令人厌烦的， bored感到厌烦。现在分词的主语通常指事物；过去分词的主语通常指人。比如第10.小题，puzzling→puzzled 考查形容词。puzzling→puzzled 主语是I，应用puzzled作表语，“感到迷惑的”，故将puzzling改为puzzled。

考点:考查短文改错