Question

【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

It is great for me to know you like Tai Chi and are willing to learn them before long. I’m sure I can give you hand happily.

Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but also has been wide admitted as a healthy sport. Knowing for its well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provided the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so necessary in our modern lives. Because it is hard to learn, Tai Chi is beneficial for your health and mind.

Concerning about your learning place and trainer, I’m proud to tell you what I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi which is always invited to teach others all over the country.

Answer 1

【答案】them改为it

give you a hand 加上冠词a

wide 改成 widely

Knowing 改成 Known

provided 改成 provides

Because 改成Although/though/While

for 改为to

删去 about

what改为that, 或删除what

which改为who

【解析】本文作者介绍了学习太极的好处，并且向朋友推荐自己的叔叔当朋友的太极教练。

第一处：考查代词。指代Tai Chi，用it，所以them改为it。

第二处：考查固定用法。give sb a hand帮助某人，是固定用法，所以give you hand 加上冠词a。

第三处：考查副词。修饰动词admitted，用副词，所以wide 改成 widely。

第四处：考查固定用法。be known for因…而众所周知，是固定用法，所以Knowing 改成 Known。

第五处：考查时态。表示一个客观的事实，用一般现在时，且主语Tai Chi是第三人称单数，所以谓语动词也用单数，provided 改成 provides。

第六处：考查连词。句意：尽管它很难学，但是它对你的健康和精神有益。表示“尽管”，所以Because 改成Although/though/While。

第七处：考查固定短语。be beneficial to有益于，是固定短语，所以for 改为to。

第八处：考查动词。句意：涉及到你学习的地点和教练。Concern当“涉及”讲时，是及物动词，所以删去about。

第九处：考查宾语从句。句意：我很自豪的告诉你我有能力推荐我们城市中最好的学校和最好的教练给你。I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you作tell的宾语，引导词在从句中不做任何成分，也没有什么实际意义，所以用that，what改为that, 或删除what。

第十处：考查定语从句。which is always invited to teach others all over the country.作master of Tai Chi的定语，分析句子可知，先行词是master，指人，而且在从句中作主语，所以which改为who。