题目内容
【题目】假设你是晨光中学的李华,英国友好学校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座,现就讲座内容征求你的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
1.你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈或其他艺术种类中任选一种);
2.你选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;
3.你希望从中有何收获。
注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris
I’ m Li Hua, a student at Chenguanp High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.
When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties. On this topic, I advise that you could give a brief introduction on the history of western music as well as the features of some main categories on the music.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply. (The writing is provided for reference only)
【解析】
这是一篇应用文写作,要求就英方教师的讲座内容提出建议,属于建议信范畴。
此次写作属于“建议信”范畴,为常见的书信体写作类型之一,得高分重在平时对固定句型的积累,写作时应注意以下两个要点:
要点1:审清题目,理清结构,写好内容。
根据题目要求,英方教师Chris将在暑期交流活动期间做一个有关西方艺术的讲座,这是大前提。现就讲座内容征求你的意见,写作提纲中列出三个写作要求:你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈或其他艺术种类中任选一种),此部分应该用简洁扼要的语言点明;你选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容,此部分为文章重点,需要适当展开;你希望从中有何收获,此部分属于文章结尾,也应该略写。根据审题结果可知,文章主体采用第一人称、一般现在时及一般将来时进行写作。
要点2:适当拓展,打磨语言,注重衔接。
文章开篇和结尾都应该加入适当的引入、寒暄或收尾内容,如“您能来给我们开讲座是我们的荣幸”、“期待您的回复”等。在文章的重点部分,应对内容进行适当拓展,如喜欢音乐的原因,可以是了解西方文化,可以是纯粹喜欢西方音乐,给我的日常生活带来力量或享受,对于讲座具体的话题内容也应适当拓展。写作时,应特别注意语言表达的地道性,同时注意上下文之间的衔接,善用连接词。