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【题目】假设你是晨光中学的李华,英国友好学校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座,现就讲座内容征求你的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

1.你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈或其他艺术种类中任选一种);

2.你选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;

3.你希望从中有何收获。

注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);

2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。

Dear Chris

I’ m Li Hua, a student at Chenguanp High School.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for your time.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.

When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties. On this topic, I advise that you could give a brief introduction on the history of western music as well as the features of some main categories on the music.

I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply. (The writing is provided for reference only)

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作,要求就英方教师的讲座内容提出建议,属于建议信范畴。

此次写作属于“建议信”范畴,为常见的书信体写作类型之一,得高分重在平时对固定句型的积累,写作时应注意以下两个要点:

要点1:审清题目,理清结构,写好内容。

根据题目要求,英方教师Chris将在暑期交流活动期间做一个有关西方艺术的讲座,这是大前提。现就讲座内容征求你的意见,写作提纲中列出三个写作要求:你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈或其他艺术种类中任选一种),此部分应该用简洁扼要的语言点明;你选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容,此部分为文章重点,需要适当展开;你希望从中有何收获,此部分属于文章结尾,也应该略写。根据审题结果可知,文章主体采用第一人称、一般现在时及一般将来时进行写作。

要点2:适当拓展,打磨语言,注重衔接。

文章开篇和结尾都应该加入适当的引入、寒暄或收尾内容,如“您能来给我们开讲座是我们的荣幸”、“期待您的回复”等。在文章的重点部分,应对内容进行适当拓展,如喜欢音乐的原因,可以是了解西方文化,可以是纯粹喜欢西方音乐,给我的日常生活带来力量或享受,对于讲座具体的话题内容也应适当拓展。写作时,应特别注意语言表达的地道性,同时注意上下文之间的衔接,善用连接词。

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【题目】 People born in winter are more likely to suffer mental health disorders, according to a recent study carried out by researchers at Vanderbilt University in Tennessee.

Researchers raised baby mice from birth to weaning in either “summer” light cycles of 16 hours of light and 8 hours of dark or “winter” cycles of 8 hours of light and 16 hours of dark. A third group experienced 12 hours of light and 12 hours of dark a day.

Then half the winter mice stayed in a winter cycle, while half switched to a summer schedule. The summer mice were similarly split. The mice raised in equal periods of light and dark were split into three groups, one of which stayed on the 12hour schedule, one of which joined the winter group, and one of which joined the summer group.

After 28 days, it turns out the summerborn mice behaved the same whether they stayed on the summer cycle or switched to winter. But among the winterborn mice, those that stayed in winter kept their previous schedule, while those that switched to summer stayed active for an extra hour and a half, which indicates that mice born and weaned in a winter light cycle showed dramatic disruptions in their biological clocks.

The finding is the first of its kind in mammals, and it could explain why people born in winter are at higher risk for mental health disorders.

“We know that the biological clock regulates mood in humans,” said study researcher McMahon. “If the mechanism similar to the one that we found in mice operates in humans, then it could not only have an effect on a number of behavioral disorders, but also have a more general effect on personality.”

1What’s the main idea of the text?

A.The biological clock regulates mood in humans.

B.Being born in winter has a negative effect on people’s mental health.

C.People born in winter are at higher risk for physical health disorders.

D.The length of light will influence the behavior of the mice.

2The underlined word “split”(Paragraph 3) can be replaced by ________.

A.dividedB.torn

C.hitD.ended

3Who is probably the reader of the passage?

A.A jobhunter.B.A student in the university.

C.A newlymarried couple.D.An experienced dentist.

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