Question

【题目】随着工业的发展，人们的生活水平得到了很大的改善。然而，工业的发展也使得污染日益严重。如何解决空气污染已经成为人们越来越关注的问题。请你根据以下提示，写一篇120词左右的短文。

1． 问题: 空气污染

2． 原因：工厂排污：汽车尾气：人们吸烟等

3． 措施：引起重视，采取有效措施

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Answer 1

【答案】

With the development of industry, people’s life has been greatly improved. But at the same time, air pollution is getting more and more serious, too, which causes all kinds of diseases to people.

Air pollution is mainly caused by factories, whose wastes are poured into rivers without being treated. Besides, cars and buses have been polluting the air we breathe, and so has smoking. Smokers burn lots of cigarettes every day, which does harm to others’ health as well as their own.

Therefore, more attention should be paid to the problem and strong measures must be taken to fight against air pollution. Only when we work together will the problem be solved.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于议论文写作，根据要求信息来写作。写作时注意以下几点：1. 仔细阅读题目，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点；2. 要包含题目有中给的两个要点，内容充实；3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文来讲用一般现在时；4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。首先，严格按照题目中所给的三个要点来写，先写了空气污染的问题，接着写了工厂排污、汽车尾气、人们吸烟等原因，最后提出了措施。还有一些短语的运用，比如at the same time，Besides，Therefore等插入语，使得文章语言流畅。另外，句式多样化，在But at the same time, air pollution is getting more and more serious, too, which causes all kinds of diseases to people.和 Air pollution is mainly caused by factories, whose wastes are poured into rivers without being treated. 以及Smokers burn lots of cigarettes every day, which does harm to others’ health as well as their own. 中用了复杂的定语从句；Only when we work together will the problem be solved.运用了倒装句的用法。此外，文章还使用了大量短语With the development of，does harm to，fight against等，也使得文章更具文采。