Question

【题目】阅读下面李明的竞选演讲稿，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Dear fellow students:

I am Li Ming from Class Two, Senior Three. Today I am very glad to stand here and run for the post of chairman of the Students’ Union of our school. I think I am a very active person and always ready to help those who need help. Furthermore, I have the experience to have been the monitor of our class for 3 years and keen on the service for you, so I am sure I am qualified for it.

If I am lucky enough to win the election, the first thing I will do is to enrich our students’ after-class activities. Owing to the efforts of our school, now more and more students have got involved in various after-class activities. I think they have benefited us a lot, because after a whole day’s heavy work, it is great to have a relaxation from the activities, which will not only improve our social ability but also make us healthier. However, not all of us have realized that yet.

Also I will do something to improve our study activities. So please give me a chance and vote for me. Believe in me. I am your best choice!

That’s all, thank you!

［写作内容］

1．以约30个词概括以上演讲的主要内容。

2．以约120个词发表你的看法，内容包括：

（1）你是否赞成李明当选学生会主席并说明理由；

（2）你是否赞成他提出的加强课外活动的建议，为什么？

（3）谈谈你最喜欢的课外活动及其对你的影响。

［写作要求］

1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

［评分标准］

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

The speech by Li Ming, candidate for the chairman of the Students' Union, explains why he is fit for the position and what he is going to do if successfully elected.

Personally, I won't hesitate to vote for the active and kind-hearted person. He, as is stated above, is always eager to help others. Besides, his three years' working experience as a monitor provides a solid proof that he possesses outstanding leadership and management skills.

Besides, from his speech, I highly appreciate his suggestion about enriching after-class activities. Colorful after-class activities will free students' mind temporarily from study pressure, and offer a chance to do some meaningful activities, thus benefiting them both mentally and physically.

Take myself for example. My favorite post-class activity is badminton. Each time I get tired with study, I go out for badminton. Sweet laughing and moving make me totally relaxed. After that, I can feel myself recharged with energy to carry on my study, in a better mood and with a stronger will.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，要求有二：1. 概括李明演讲的主要内容；2. 发表你的看法，内容包括：（1）你是否赞成李明当选学生会主席并说明理由；（2）你是否赞成他提出的加强课外活动的建议，为什么？（3）谈谈你最喜欢的课外活动及其对你的影响。短文应该用一般现在时概括李明演讲的主要内容，以第一人称发表看法。多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】本文准确概括了李明的竞选演讲稿。解释了他为什么适合学生会主席这一职位，以及若竞选成功后将要采取的措施。如He is always eager to help others. Besides, his three years' working experience as a monitor provides a solid proof that he possesses outstanding leadership and management skills. 和Colorful after-class activities will free students' mind temporarily from study pressure, and offer a chance to do some meaningful activities, thus benefiting them both mentally and physically.等等。注重句子之间的连贯衔接，如Personally, Besides, After that,等等。句中还有as is stated above,非限制性定语从句，that he possesses outstanding leadership and management skills.同位语从句等提高了文章的表达水平。