题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,最近从报纸上得知2017敦煌文博会“Silk Road (Dunhuang) International Cultural Expo”将于9月举行,组委会现面向全社会招募志愿者,要求英语口语流利,了解丝路文化及国外习俗等。请给组委会写一份信申请该职位。
注意:1. 字数100字左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
4. 参考词汇:recruit v. 招聘
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to get the news from the local newspaper that __________________________________________
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Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to get the news from the local newspaper that some volunteers are recruited for the Expo this year. I am really so interested in it that I’d like to apply for it.
First, please allow me to introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, a student from one of the best senior high schools in Lanzhou. I have ever visited some English countries, therefore I am very good at spoken English and pretty familiar with English traditions and customs. On the other hand, I have been a volunteer for Lanzhou International Marathon in the last 3 years, so I am really experienced in being a volunteer.
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:
本文是写给2017敦煌文博会组委会的申请信,作者希望成为此次活动的志愿者。文章题干给出的对志愿者的要求也就是作者需要突出介绍自己的内容。成文时应注意以下几点:(1) 内容完整。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点,列出提纲:第一部分:写作目的(知道2017敦煌文博会组委会在招募志愿者,对此很感兴趣,想要申请);第二部分:介绍自己(介绍的优点要符合组委会对志愿者的要求,如英语口语流利,了解国外文化,有志愿者的经验);第三部分:表达愿望(希望自己可以得到机会)。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:so …that句型I am really so interested in it that I’d like to apply for it;形式宾语it后接宾语从句的用法I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. Looking forward to hearing from you.。2.使用了过渡词语:First,On the other hand等。3.使用了重要短语:apply for申请;be good at擅长;look forward to期待;hear from收到来信。