题目内容
10.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
A terrible earthquake strike Wenchuan in 2008.Many people lost their lives and homes.After the earthquake under a fallen building,a mother as well as her baby were found by some soldiers.When the soldiers were ready to taking them away,they surprised to find the baby in the mother's arms still alive.The baby was sleeping but wasn't hurt at all.Between the dead mother and the living baby,there was a cell phone with a short message on the screen.It read,"Don't worry,my baby.Mom is for you.If you can survive,don't forget that I love you."
The story moved me deep.I couldn't hold back my tears when I read these word.One is great if he love others when he is in the danger.
分析 文章讲述了汶川地震中一位伟大的母亲.当救援战士在一座倒塌的房子里找到一位母亲和她的孩子时,发现孩子还活着.手机上有条信息:别担心,我的孩子.妈妈和你在一起.如果你能活下去,不要忘了我爱你.看到这些不禁让人潸然泪下.一个人自己身处险境,还爱着别人,他是多么的伟大啊!
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The story moved me deep.I couldn't hold back my tears when I read these word.One is great if he love others when he is in the danger.
deeply words loves 去掉
1.strike改为struck.文章讲述的是过去的事,要用一般过去时态.
2.were改为was.主语是a mother单数,谓语动词也要用单数.
3.taking改为take.短语搭配,be ready to do sth准备干某事.
4.加were.短语搭配,be surprised感到惊讶.
5.but改为and.句意表示的是并列关系,不是转折.
6.for改为with.句意表达的是妈妈和你在一起,with和某人一起.
7.deep改为deeply.修饰动词moved,要用副词.
8.word改为words.句意表示的是当我看到这些话,words话.
9.love改为loves.主语是he,谓语动词要用三单形式.
10.the去掉.短语搭配,in danger身处险境.
点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.
A. | to keep | B. | to have kept | C. | keeping | D. | having kept |