写作第一节:短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分.满分10分) 文中共有10处语言错误.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词, 2．只允许修改10处.多者不� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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写作（共两节，满分40分）（直接做在答题卷上。）

第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mike called his wife to tell him that he had got two film tickets. He asked her to go and meet him outside the theatre. Mike’s wife is very glad because they hadn’t seen a film for quite long time. She met her husband in the entrance to the cinema. Mike took out his wallet to get the ticket, so they were not there. He then tried his pockets, but the tickets were not there, too. Mike looked very worrying. “What’s the matter?” asked his wife. “Well,” Mike explained, “I remember that I did with them. I put them on the desk and forgot to pick them up before leaving for the office!”

迈克叫他的妻子告诉他，他有两个电影票。他问她去迎接他的剧院外。麦克的妻子很高兴，因为他们没有看到在相当长一段时间的电影。她会见了到电影院门口，她的丈夫。迈克掏出钱包来取票，所以他们不存在。他试图在口袋里，但机票不是那里。迈克看上去很令人担忧。 “怎么回事？”问他的妻子。 “嗯，”迈克解释说，“我记得我和他们一样。我把桌子上他们忘了挑选办公室前离开他们了！

【小题1】him—her

【小题2】is—was

【小题3】a∧ long

【小题4】In—At

【小题5】ticket—tickets

【小题6】so—but

【小题7】too—either

【小题8】worrying—worried

【小题9】that—what

【小题10】删去for

解析:

【小题1】人称代词错误。我的妻子。him—her

【小题2】时态错误。时态为一般过去时。

【小题3】a long time好久以来，在很长时间内，表示一个范围

【小题4】介词错误。At the entrance to the cinema

【小题5】两个人看电影买两张票，用复数。

【小题6】票不见了，用but表转折。

【小题7】否定意义没有用either

【小题8】主语是人时用worried

【小题9】what I did主语从句

【小题10】介词错误。固定搭配，leaving the office

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